This was so sweet, and I loved how the Pgymalion tale softly figures in the story. Other than the fact that it was Patricia who proposed marriage, it's a perfectly believable tale from a time when society was overly concerned with the silliest things.
(I think I would have loved to marry Oswald too, though I don't think I could've changed him as much as Patricia was able to.)
Yes, Patricia proposing is a bit unrealistic in the given society, isn't it? ^_^;; The story I based it on kind of necessitated it, but I wish I could have made the setup more plausible. I'm glad the rest of the story sounds believable though, because I did very little research and went by on genre conventions for the most part. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
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(I think I would have loved to marry Oswald too, though I don't think I could've changed him as much as Patricia was able to.)
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Now only if I could remember the original ondal story...
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