[story] raven lies

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author: risen (worldatomic)
email: warfair [at] hotmail.com

Comments

[sleepfighter]

This. I love this story so damn much. Especially the ending.

[strzyga]

thank you!

i'm so excited to finally get it posted, it's been written since the 'travel' theme but i missed the deadline.

[wide_eyed_raven]

That was both oddly hot and disterbing at the same time, you painted it beautifully...

The flowers were a lovely touch and Ravenli seems oddly childlike sometimes, like when he first died some part of him stayed that way...

[strzyga]

haha thank you! that was the point lol.

you're actually the first person i've had comment on that (because i brought this in to my writing class for critique), but he was deliberately written to be oddly childlike. i'm glad you noticed!

[wide_eyed_raven]

Well you certainly made it ^_^

Really? I'm surprised :P

[rei_kurasaki]

oh man, I really like this. with all the flares of colour and viscera words.

[strzyga]

thank you 8)

[wordsofastory]

Oh, this is really wonderful. I love the descriptions of the places, particularly; you did an amazing job of picking out vivid and recognizable details. Fantastic story.

[strzyga]

oh, thank you! 8) ♥♥