[story] the princess and the fallen star

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author: h bright (Dreamwidth)

Comments

[uminohikari]

♥ Very interesting!

[mythicbeast]

Hey, that was a pretty good take on 'creation'-type myths-- I don't know if you based it off a specific story, but it seemed pretty fresh and original to me. I mean, the concept isn't new-- people were always looking to find ways to explain celestial phenomena since long, long ago-- but I can safely say this is the first time I've seen it explained quite like this, and I like it a lot.

"I shall not go back to the others. They are too far away. I shall give you light."

I'm not sure why I loved that line so much, but I do.

[venefica_aura]

This is a clever creation myth. Makes my nerdy folklore side happy.

~Cendri

[wordsofastory]

Oh, lovely! The last line is really sort of heart-tugging. Excellent story.

[february_sky]

i enjoyed that! that was a really good attempt at creating your own myth, it was very interesting.