[story] long hot night

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author: hazard_us (hazard_us)
email: scorpio_kaur [at] yahoo.com

Comments

[anonymous]

This is elegant, vivid and haunting.

[hazard_us]

Thank you!

[wordsofastory]

Oh, wow. Now this is an excellent story. The language of it is so gorgeous- I love the images, from the sun to the owl-witch to little things like the dust on the road. This reads like a myth or a fairy tale, but an old one, sharp and cruel. It's incredibly lovely, and thank you so much for writing it.

Also, I have to say that I think it's really cool that in your stories you've been using things from cultures other than Western Europe or Japan. I love the different elements you bring in.

[hazard_us]

Thank you so much for commenting - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Also, I have to say that I think it's really cool that in your stories you've been using things from cultures other than Western Europe or Japan.
Part of the reason I love this comm so much is that as a writer, it lets me (and sometimes forces me) to go outside the comfortable norms of my usual stories. So I figure, if I'm pushing it one way, I might as well try another. ^_^ Sometimes I wonder how well it comes out - so I'm glad you like the experimenting!