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[story] what you need
Jun 02, 2007 01:24
author: jaz templet (
yachiru
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email: yachiru [at] gmail.com
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It was raining. The taste of salt in his mouth. He leaned his head back; the rain burned his skin.
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book 03: cyberpunk
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letterbugg
June 3 2007, 07:45:08 UTC
The salt and sugar and dark melancholy in a mechanical setting here gave me a vivid picture of dark clouds and broken wires sticking in the air and masses of electronic waste. I think this is an intriguing piece. =)
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wordsofastory
July 31 2007, 19:30:18 UTC
Oh, neat. This is a really cool twist on the story of cyber-lovers; I like so much what you've done here. Great job!
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