Hidden Identity-Chapter 11

[iantojjackh]

Title: Hidden Identity- Chapter 11/13 + Epilogue
Author: Iantojjackh
Rating: PG
Summary: Jack and Ianto have returned to Earth and brought the 456 with them. It's just another day in the adventures of Jack and Ianto and the identity of the shadowy figure is revealed.
Characters: Jack Harkness, Alonso Frame, Gwen Cooper, Rhys Williams, Rhiannon Davies, Ianto

Comments

[jackdavfan692]

I'm glad their plan to deal with Gwen worked :]! A shame Ianto had to stand there and take it from her, though :(. I liked the way you described his feelings as he was listening to her 8).

I knew that's who the shadowy figure was =)! Great way to figure Twelve in, and explain exactly why that incarnation of the Doctor ends up resembling Frobisher in the first place.

You wrote Jack's and Ianto's interactions with him really well, too- just the right mix of emotions on both their parts- some anger & rage toward him at first, but gradually more calmness, understanding, and respectfulness as he explains himself. I liked the way you wrote him, too (I'd imagine if Twelve does encounter Jack at some point, their interaction may very well unfold in a similar way, depending on what point in Jack's life that meeting occurs, and whether Moffat will decide to acknowledge "Miracle Day" as well as COE.). And YAY that he's going to let Jack and Ianto stay together C=!

When I started posting this I did not realise how perfectly this would time with introducing the new Doctor.
No? I would never have guessed that was the case =|! Because it seemed very timely that you were finally posting the story mere days before Matt Smith was going to bow out as the Doctor, and Peter Capaldi was going to step into the role at the end of the Christmas special.

[iantojjackh]

Thank you.

The timing really was unintentional. This piece was originally supposed to be only 11 chapters w/ the sequel, but it split two chapters up for dramatic effect.