Comments | iantojjackh: Chapter 5- You Can't Go Home Again

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Chapter 5- You Can't Go Home Again

Dec 20, 2013 10:16

Title: Hidden Identity- Chapter 5/13 + Epilogue
Author: Iantojjackh
Rating: PG
Summary: It began in a bar on a cold fusion cruiser with a stranger named Alonso. From there Jack's life takes a turn he never expected. Now it's time to return home and an old enemy returns.
Characters: Jack Harkness, Alonso Frame, Gwen Cooper, Rhys Williams, Rhiannon Davies, ( Read more... )

big bang, hidden identity, ianto, longliveianto, jack, au

Comments 22

badly_knitted December 20 2013, 16:07:51 UTC

*GULP* The 456 are back? And they know and can get to Ianto? This is seriously bad news.

I feel bad for Alice, but the only person who can give her answers is her father, and I doubt the answers would make her feel better. I don't know if anything would.

iantojjackh December 21 2013, 04:31:06 UTC

Thank you.

Yes, they are back and they want the ones who killed their brethren. Alice is afraid of what she might hear from Jack and she has so much anger and it did not help,that Jack ran.

katwillow December 20 2013, 18:23:08 UTC

Oh wow, I am so bloody frightened right now. Seriously. I want my Bubba bear and my blanky and the lights on. Those creatures scare me as much as the Angels.
But this time our Lads need to stick together and think.

iantojjackh December 21 2013, 04:34:41 UTC

Thank you.

Yes they will put their heads together to com with a solution and maybe they will get some help in that quest.

lorib12 December 20 2013, 19:27:44 UTC

Everyday I go on LJ to peek at my friends page and I get enticed by seeing updates of this story. I've always been one to wait until the entire story is posted before reading, and it's getting harder and harder to hold off on this one!! So, just so ya know, I'm SOOOOOO excited to read this story :-)) :-))

iantojjackh December 21 2013, 04:40:03 UTC

Thank you. Your comment really brighten my bad day (which included my mother using money given to me as change that came straight from Gareth's wallet)

I'm glad you decided to take a look before I'm done posting. I plan on posting a chapter a day, as long as the holidays don't prove too crazy.

ganamor13 December 20 2013, 21:53:27 UTC

I've always wondered if the 456 were the aliens that attacked Jack's home planet and captured Gray.

iantojjackh December 21 2013, 04:33:47 UTC

Hmm. I never thought of that. That is very possible. Could make a good twist in a story.

bluelilacs December 20 2013, 22:24:12 UTC

Damn! Not the 456 again. I hate those creepy, nasty bastards. I hope Jack didn't wander off too far. Also, I think the Doctor had better get his ass there and help this time.

iantojjackh December 21 2013, 04:41:48 UTC

Thank you.

Those nasty buggers have a habit of popping up.

You'll see where Jack wandered off to next chapter:)

Doctor, oh, Doctor where are you?