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Ok this is my first entry and AGAIN if its bad please tell me and HELP ME WRITE BETTER AHHHHHHHHHHH :3 Ok Ok Ok Ok Ok Ok Ok Ok HERE IT IS HEHEHEHHEHEHEEHEH<33333 Oh and tell me if im posting wrong or like writing it the wrong way or something like that so i dont make a fool outta myself again! Ok NOW REEAD.
It was a rather hot day considering it was in the middle of March. It was a perfect day to go outside to run threw flowers letting the breeze fly at you. All Ian wanted was that feeling, to be joyful and feel free. But the 16 year old wasn't free just yet. He had to face his new school in California. He was thinking about that the whole car ride with his mom. Its going to be ok right? I mean it cant be that bad, he would tell himself staring off into the rich farmlands and full meadows. His mother wanted him to be happy and enjoy the view but no matter how hard he tried, he was just depressed. Ian had to break up with his last boyfriend, Jack. Even though his mom says there are more boys in California he was preparing for teasing....
After hours of gliding across the same road they finally arrived at the highway. Ian did cheer up a little when he saw the exit they were suppose to go to. Well, there must be a place where I can sit in a corner and hide, he imagines him sitting in a school basment hugging his knees hiding from the teasing of fellow classmates.
"WERE HERE!!!' His mom exclaim pulling up into their new home driveway. Ian sighs at the two story house. His new home. He hopes to god that he can stay here and never go to school. This is where his life will begin.
This is just a little bit to see if you guys find it OK or like EWW THATS SO SUCKY UGH EWW BLEH *THROW UP* BLEH. :?
It was a rather hot day considering it was in the middle of March. It was a perfect day to go outside to run threw flowers letting the breeze fly at you. All Ian wanted was that feeling, to be joyful and feel free. But the 16 year old wasn't free just yet. He had to face his new school in California. He was thinking about that the whole car ride with his mom. Its going to be ok right? I mean it cant be that bad, he would tell himself staring off into the rich farmlands and full meadows. His mother wanted him to be happy and enjoy the view but no matter how hard he tried, he was just depressed. Ian had to break up with his last boyfriend, Jack. Even though his mom says there are more boys in California he was preparing for teasing....
After hours of gliding across the same road they finally arrived at the highway. Ian did cheer up a little when he saw the exit they were suppose to go to. Well, there must be a place where I can sit in a corner and hide, he imagines him sitting in a school basment hugging his knees hiding from the teasing of fellow classmates.
"WERE HERE!!!' His mom exclaim pulling up into their new home driveway. Ian sighs at the two story house. His new home. He hopes to god that he can stay here and never go to school. This is where his life will begin.
This is just a little bit to see if you guys find it OK or like EWW THATS SO SUCKY UGH EWW BLEH *THROW UP* BLEH. :?