Preface... I dont know where I got this thought, no significance at all, just some writing!!

[iand187]

She walked in..... as my eyes scanned the surrounding white walls, her brilliance left me blind. She spoke eloquently of the days gone by; the nights spent over the glass bottles, the countless hours spent doting upon her careless love. I wanted to help her. My heart leaped at the chance to console the broken heart that has fell upon the floor

Comments

Beautiful

[bcutiepie07]

Ian you are a wonderful writer and this passage is very well written. Its beautiful. You should put more of these thoughts of yours on here, they are very interesting!

[anonymous]

I'm anxiously waiting for the sequal...

And don't worry- you're a beautiful writer.

-You know who :)

[jkono]

ian, ian, ian...i miss you so.

[chucknorris999]

I remember that time....but my eyes are brown, not hazel...