Never Did Run Smooth, Ch. 25
Finally! The chapter with sex in it! Of course, it does not come free of drama. And there's a bit more of the kid and the monkey first; you can skip that if you're impatient. XP
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ALSO, I LOVE MIMIC. TO BITSES. I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO WRITING "MIMIC SAVES THE DAY!" BUT IT REQUIRES SILVERBOLT.
AWW, CHEETOR. YOU'RE GROWING UP. THAT'S ADORABLE. SO IS KITTY-YOGA.
Well. That there's some whiplash. Seriously.
RATTRAP. YOUR SEXYTALK. IS FAIL. ALSO, ONE WITH A SOUTH BOSTON ACCENT SHOULD NEVER ATTEMPT SEXYTALK. TRUST ME ON THIS ONE.
Also, "filthy little Pred-lover?" I mean, I know you're rather more proud of being a rodent than, say, Splinter, but. It's quite amazing how four words can be so right and so wrong.
Oh, Dinobot. I thought you had learned how to make Rattrap shut up. And it's not your hand over his mouth.
There are literally so many ear quotes, I got an overflow error trying to pick one.
And I would not want Rattrap's skin. Also, it's too early for me to start emoing and hating Rhinox. Also, why does PAIN get ALL CAPS?
Also. Rattrap. RATTRAP. RATTRAP. I know you have a deathwish, but are you trying to take Dinobot down with you or what?
I am so glad I don't have to try to explain it to Primal. Or Rhinox. Or Cheetor. In fact, just about the only Maximal ever I'd want to explain that to would be Silverbolt, and he's in orbit. (Depth Charge would understand it easily, but I'd rather punch him in the face.)
...that was rather short. Sorry.
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I have to watch her carefully or she'll steal the story. (And pick it apart to see how it works, before discarding it out of boredom.)
Re: Cheetor growing up -- about damn time.
I don't think Rattrap was trying to be sexy. I doubt he even realized what was coming out of his mouth.
I wish "filthy Pred-lover" was meant as dirty talk, but I don't think it was. Rattrap, man. ISSUES.
Well, Rattrap bit his lip too. No matter what he uses to cover the vermin's mouth, it was bound to get chomped on. Dennis is driving.
Dinobot now has a new appreciation for what it feels like to Rattrap when people smack him. Seriously, nobody thinks of this stuff.
IT IS NEVER TOO EARLY TO EMO.
Read back over Rattrap's catalogue of injuries. Something tells me pain was standing out a bit more strongly than the rest. Thank Primus for nanite-based structures -- he'll be good as new in a few hours.
HE USED DINOBOT. RIGHT THERE. I SAW IT. Of course, Dinobot did have the option of pulling back. Idiots, the both of them.
Explanations are next chapter, so we'll see how that goes. Cheetor I'm not so worried about. He's pretty much accepted that nothing about Rattrap makes sense. But Optimus "We Don't Hit Each Other" Primal and Rattrap's "Only I Can Hit Him" overprotective best friend are NOT gonna be happy.
Short? Lady, your definition needs work. Short is "OMG I LUV IT RITE MOAR!!!" I prefer commentary, brief or no.
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