So this is what's been driving me crazy all semester. It became an exercise in quantity over quality once I realized that I had set myself up for too much work for one semester. I like some of the page layouts and panel designs, but overall I consider this an experiment in producing longer form comic work. The final critique was pretty much everything I had suspected it to be. Well hopefully next semester's project won't drive me crazy and will produce some higher quality work that I can post on here as I finish each piece.