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Past Due 1/1 (Supernatural)

Jan 11, 2007 16:01

Past Due
By iamstealthyone

Summary: They kicked a lot of demon ass. Kicked the demon’s ass. Then everything went to hell. Deathfic.

Timeline: Set just a few years down the road.

Spoilers: Episode 2.1, In My Time of DyingCharacters: Sam and Dean ( Read more... )

in my time of dying, episode-related, a/u, supernatural, deathfic

Comments 64

eloise_bright January 11 2007, 23:36:14 UTC

OW. My heart. I needed that for living.

The angst in this is almost a physical presence.

“I don’t want to do this alone, Dean,” he whispered. “I don’t think I can do this alone.”

That echo of Dean's line in the pilot hurt my heart.

iamstealthyone January 11 2007, 23:49:57 UTC

OW. My heart. I needed that for living.

*g* I'm sorry. *coaxes heart back into working order* There you go, good as new. :)

That echo of Dean's line in the pilot hurt my heart.

I'm glad that line struck you, and that you picked up on how Sam's words echoed Dean's from the pilot ep.

Thanks for the kind feedback. :)

embroiderama January 11 2007, 23:50:28 UTC

WAAAAH! I can totally see that happened, but *sniiiiif* poor Sam.

iamstealthyone January 11 2007, 23:59:14 UTC

It's really sad to think of one of them being left behind, isn't it? I'd rather they go out together, or live forever.

Living forever would be preferable, of course. :)

Thanks for the feedback!

kellifer_fic January 12 2007, 00:17:27 UTC

Oh ow... that hit all my hurty spots.

Lovely.

iamstealthyone January 12 2007, 02:16:26 UTC

Oh ow... that hit all my hurty spots.

Just what I like to hear. *g* Thanks much for the kind feedback!

sophisticas January 12 2007, 00:44:27 UTC

Oh. Just, oh.

*points to tears in eyes* Your fault.

(Gorgeous, well done. :))

iamstealthyone January 12 2007, 02:18:32 UTC

*points to tears in eyes* Your fault.

*hands over Kleenex* So good to hear this struck a chord with you. Thanks much for the lovely feedback. :)

buffyaddict13 January 12 2007, 00:56:18 UTC

you wrote:

“I don’t want to do this alone, Dean,” he whispered. “I don’t think I can do this alone.”

Outside, the sun began its descent, and ashes drifted in the breeze.

and then i cried.

poor sam.

what a clever idea to make john's deal, uh, expire.

beautifully done. thank you.

*goes to get kleenex*

iamstealthyone January 12 2007, 02:21:51 UTC

and then i cried.

poor sam.

*pats you and Sam on the shoulder*

Hard to think of Sam all alone, isn't it?

what a clever idea to make john's deal, uh, expire.

Thanks! I got the idea for this right after IMToD aired, but didn't do anything with it until now. It really struck me, though, that there could be catch-22 that would come back and hurt the boys.

Poor, angsty Winchesters.

So glad you liked this, and thanks much for the lovely feedback!