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iamjabberwok

Quick Fic

Jul 30, 2008 01:07

Title: Like Moths to a Flame
Challenge: Obsession
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jack/Ianto Jack/Doctor
Warnings: over-complicated sentence structure. I’m feeling wordy, sorry.
Summary: He will always come between them.

( It was quite a while before Jack realized he was addicted )

jack/ianto, jack/doctor (10), doctor who

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iamjabberwok July 31 2008, 20:02:42 UTC

"The Doctor has more charisma in his little finger than Ianto has in his whole body!"

Amen! I totally agree ;D

(ps: hope the move went smoothly. I've done that enough to know what a pain it is.)

shinodabear July 31 2008, 18:44:48 UTC

I've a soft spot for anything remotely Jack/the Hand. *G* Obsession was quite the prompt for that. I think, no matter who Jack is with, the Doctor will always wedge between them. Nice! And the font is just fine.

iamjabberwok July 31 2008, 20:08:45 UTC

I agree entirely.

Jack's obsession for the The Hand is cannon.

vail_kagami August 1 2008, 01:21:19 UTC

Sarkywoman has spoken some words of wisdom here: If the Doctor was in the room you wouldn't even see Ianto! He'd just blink out of existence.
I liked the story a lot. (Could have done with slighly smaller text though - I think it's easier to read if there are more words in one line, but maybe that's just me.) Jack really is obsessed with the Doctor. Or at least he was, before they met again. And walking out on Jack would be a way for Ianto to show some personality.
You amost made me feel sorry for the poor replacement lover here, and that's not an easy thing to do.

iamjabberwok August 1 2008, 16:30:37 UTC

Actually, Ianto surprised me too. I agree with Sarkywoman, he dissappears when the Doctor's around (even when it's just his hand...poor Ianto) But in the story, he decided to stand up for himself. Maybe, Jack is really just Ianto's replacement for Lisa, and their both using eachother for Teh Smex.

(in terms of size of font, I actually agree with you, but I've had some complaints so I'm trying new things. I think I may change the color layout altogether to something more readable.)

By the way, I stumbled across your latest story on Wintercompainon and thought it was magnificent. I didn't comment there since I'm not a member, and it would feel too much like stalking, so instead I'll be a creepy stalker on my own journal ;)