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Harry Potter: Lucius/Severus

May 22, 2007 19:46

Title: Loving Severus
Written for: sl_duel
Challenge: a tale of misfortune
Rating: R
Summary: Lucius has a time turner, and uses it to go forward in time...
Word Count: ~1500

( Loving Severus )

lucius/severus, severus/draco, r, harry potter, slash

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emeraldsword May 23 2007, 09:33:19 UTC

uh, I did see it coming, sorry *g* But I loved it anyway, and I thought that Snape was going to get away with it (though it'd have been a weaker story if he had). This was really good.

iamisaac May 23 2007, 14:53:32 UTC

to be honest, I thought it was about the most obvious plot device I've ever used. I'm not bothered by the fact that you saw it coming: I expected people to. So I'm glad it worked anyway, because that was the effect I was aiming for (obvious but still not too bad).

emeraldsword May 23 2007, 20:36:09 UTC

Oh, it was definitely good! Just, not a surprise.

iamisaac May 24 2007, 06:45:04 UTC

Well, I'm stunned it surprised anyone, especially the people (and there were a few) who knew that part of the prompt for this included the words 'mistaken identities'. So I presumed that there was no way it could be a shock. The only point was supposed to be that it surprised Lucius at the end...

emeraldsword May 24 2007, 19:01:16 UTC

Yes, and I thought it was a really good thing that you didn't tell us about how Lucius felt then but left us to imagine it (because it was SO COOL that Lucius had no idea).

iamisaac May 25 2007, 07:08:58 UTC

Thing is - why would he? because he didn't know he was going to have a son....

emeraldsword May 25 2007, 19:35:20 UTC

Yeah, exactly, and when you think of it like that it's like well, DUH, but because we see more of Draco than of Lucius, we know exactly who Snape thinks he's seeing.

iamisaac May 26 2007, 08:22:51 UTC

*g*

Or apparently, most of us don't ;-) But the intention was just as you put it :)

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