yea u better not be getting rid of it...that would be a shame if u did...
i finished grading kate's paper...shes a really good writer and thats a really good essay..i put an A+ on the top too and i said "very witty,funny,interesting, and informative" cause it definitely was...
anyhoo i had a fun day yesterday and ill be spending all of my day today doing homework...
hopefully ill talk to u today, if not, c u in english tomorrow.
kate is a wonderful writer. not as good as my wonderbread paper though. nothing was. at all. NOTHING.
on her paper i drew a "candy raver" with a syringe in one hand and lots of candy braclets and neckalaces. i'm sure you saw it? i hope so because you always appreciate my best work. her paper really was informative about the people shooting up and all.
i'm glad you had a fun day yesterday. tomorrow you need to tell me all about it. i've got a ton of homework too.
oh yes i saw that pic...it was the highlight of the whole paper...i also went ahead and edited it and added my own artistic ideas to your syringe candy-man...i will show u tomorrow...afetr u show me the pic u drew for me...=)
haha you always add the best touches to my pictures. like the new york city skyline, and the empire state building. that was clever. and the "spiral window architecture". tomorrow in english, let's add more to it.
i really was proud of my paper. but i like yours. so much. the bum-who-got-a-job thing was awesome. i was cracking up.
make a bubble map or a web or whatever your elementary school teachers called it. one for setting and one for characters. mine i put a circle that said character map in the middle, then i did bubbles for the cop, the psycho, and the other characters, and then for each character you do a physical bubble and a personality bubble and from each of those you put bubbles including physical and personality traits. then make one for setting. time, place, etc. then write out a general conclusion for your story.
jeez ned you're listening in class as well as i used to.
well sorryyy...i was kinda busy studying for the burninators test...so i didnt listen...and i feel history class is alot more important than english..i mean grade-wise...A-English, Low B-History
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i finished grading kate's paper...shes a really good writer and thats a really good essay..i put an A+ on the top too and i said "very witty,funny,interesting, and informative" cause it definitely was...
anyhoo i had a fun day yesterday and ill be spending all of my day today doing homework...
hopefully ill talk to u today, if not, c u in english tomorrow.
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on her paper i drew a "candy raver" with a syringe in one hand and lots of candy braclets and neckalaces. i'm sure you saw it? i hope so because you always appreciate my best work. her paper really was informative about the people shooting up and all.
i'm glad you had a fun day yesterday. tomorrow you need to tell me all about it.
i've got a ton of homework too.
so i'll see you "on the reverse side" in english.
i drew you a fantastic picture...heh...
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NOTHING was better than your paper..
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i really was proud of my paper. but i like yours. so much. the bum-who-got-a-job thing was awesome. i was cracking up.
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one for setting and one for characters.
mine i put a circle that said character map in the middle, then i did bubbles for the cop, the psycho, and the other characters, and then for each character you do a physical bubble and a personality bubble and from each of those you put bubbles including physical and personality traits.
then make one for setting. time, place, etc.
then write out a general conclusion for your story.
jeez ned you're listening in class as well as i used to.
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well sorryyy...i was kinda busy studying for the burninators test...so i didnt listen...and i feel history class is alot more important than english..i mean grade-wise...A-English, Low B-History
so yea dont give me that bullshit..heh
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