Foolish games, part 24

Sep 07, 2009 15:53


Characters: Callica
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Sorry this took forever to post! I've hardly had any time to write, be online or relax lately, so this took a while...

A love out of the ordinary )

callie torres, erica hahn

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fudaliciousfud September 7 2009, 17:23:55 UTC
Mean! :p Can't wait for the next bit!

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i_see_leaves September 7 2009, 18:34:27 UTC
I knooow, totally mean, but between learning the Polish numbers between 1 - 100 and the vertebral column it was all i had time for;)

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fudaliciousfud September 7 2009, 22:30:32 UTC
Hm. Weird. Are you basically starting from scratch on the medical knowledge stuff? I remember my 1st year anatomy class... I still use my textbook for random referrals. You'd probably like it, even if it's not a cardiology textbook. ;)

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i_see_leaves September 8 2009, 09:39:10 UTC
Yup, totally from scratch. I've just started reading a little about bones, joints and ligaments, because the first test is after a month, and apparently it's quite hard. Now we just have precourses in chemistry, physics and biology. Oh, and polish.

You've had anatomy?:D That's really cool! I'm actually not THAT into cardiology, to be honest i'm thinking of going into Ortho...

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i_see_leaves September 7 2009, 18:35:20 UTC
I was afraid it was too mushy-gushy, lovey-dovey, sappy-happy, so i'm glad you liked it despite of its cheesiness!

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Re: Did You Not See My UserPic!?!? HOPELESS ROMANTIC, remember? i_see_leaves September 7 2009, 19:12:20 UTC
LOL! Great!:D Cheese is nice:) Hope i'll have time to update soon, i have it all planned out in my head and just want to write it down, but my mind is a little like porridge these days with all the stuff i'm trying to cram into it. Thanks for continuing to read my stuff anyway:)

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sapphicwarrior September 7 2009, 18:36:33 UTC
excellent update! The way you wrote Callie's pain made it very real and heartbreaking. But then Erica was there for her to comfort her and hold her close. You wrote the effect Erica has on Callie very well. When I'm down about something, my wife is like Erica, comforting me and making me see things the right way and not the way others see them.
Really loved this update, there was so much love between Erica and Callie in this :D
Hope everything is well in Poland :).

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i_see_leaves September 8 2009, 10:09:09 UTC
Aww, i'm glad i managed to convey it like i wanted to, the love they have is so apparent that i feel the need to describe it all the time;)

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hottielibrarian September 8 2009, 03:25:45 UTC
Thank you so much for updating! I was THRILLED to see you updated! And you did not disappoint at all, this couldn't have been sweeter.
You've created quite the villain with Dr. Wright. I can't wait to see what other trouble he's going to stir up.
I so love how Erica takes care of Callie. I really laughed at the line about if someone couldn't see the chemistry and connection between Callie and Erica, they were stupid, which is totally true! How could you not see the chemistry between them.
My heart broke when Erica rememembered the story about Callie bringing her a sandwich. That was such a sweet story and I could see Callie doing that and it meaning so much to Erica.
The best part was Callie standing up and taking her shirt off. You always describe their kisses so well too, the heat between them.
This was perfect and truly made my day. Thank you so,so much for writing and sharing your incredible work.

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i_see_leaves September 8 2009, 10:14:40 UTC
Wohoo, thanks for all your praise! I wasn't quite happy with this myself, so i really appreciate it:)

I really want to show how their compassion goes both ways, that they both care just as much about each other:) Lol, yeah, i love kicking ABC every chance i get, and they're really too stupid not to see their chemistry.

I wanted to write the next scene (and a few more!) too, but i didn't have the time...

Wow, it made MY day to know i made yours!!

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fast_chicken September 9 2009, 14:37:36 UTC
Wow, what an amazing update, I really loved it.
Oh, I loved the sandwich story, that was so sweet!! I am a hopeless romantic too :)

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i_see_leaves September 13 2009, 09:38:54 UTC
Thank you!:D Glad you liked mushy-gushy lovey-dovey!:) I'm actually only a hopeless romantic when it comes to Callica... They have something special:)

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