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Who Could Ask For Any More - Part Two - October

Jun 18, 2011 21:21

Title: Who Could Ask For Any More?
Part: Two
Word Count: 9,316

Previous Parts: Prologue | Part One

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Comments 6

yellowwolf5 June 25 2011, 21:14:45 UTC

I think I just fell in love with this story ♥ It flows so well and I love how you're writing everyone. ♥ Jesse's make-over will be interesting to see, lol. and ugh, Andrew's speech. Made me tear up a little, such lovely things to stay. damn, Jesse, can't you tell he likes you the way you are? hahah. though I do get why he's doing it. annnyyyywaaay, really enjoyed this and looking forward to more ♥ ♥

elizabethjoan June 25 2011, 23:53:48 UTC

Andrew being distraught over the idea of this 'personality overhaul' is making me ;alskjdhf;

But yes, this is seriously well-written.
I adore it.

effy_slytherin June 26 2011, 04:20:41 UTC

This story is so good! I love how you've written everybody. Of course Andrew and Jesse are great and I adored how Andrew reacted negatively to the group wanting to change Jesse. And the whole "you're incredible the way you are" speech he gave Jess was sweet. I can't wait to see how the 'personality overhaul' turns out... though I'm hoping Jesse sort of stays the same, for Andrew's sake, but also just because I love him the way he is here^^ Oh and Armie is my favorite in the bunch! Armie Hammer in real life seems adorable and you've written him so brilliantly:) I can't wait for more.

ext_474683 June 30 2011, 19:54:13 UTC

I love this so much, I can't even put it in words <3

vaylaa July 1 2011, 01:14:55 UTC

This is wonderful. Oh lawd I am so excited about it, I can't wait to see how it'll go. I love that Andrew is against the makeover idea and so I am, Jesse has to have his curls.

superschnittiu August 12 2011, 10:43:47 UTC

Andrew holds his hand up and out of the way of Jesse's. "No, you can't. I've seen you in the cafeteria, and you always end up with more food on your shirt than in you do in your actual mouth. Come on, now."

UNBELIEVAVBLE ADORABLE!!!!

best chapter so far, wonderful storyline, completely adorable (every single character) and to be honest, i wish id had such a group of friends!!!!

the ending!!!!! im lost for words, as i cant say how much of a cutie this andrew is and im sure jesse still hasnt any clue - I LOVE THIS COUPLE!!