Oh man. That was devastating. I was going to point out particular lines but then I would have to copy and paste the whole thing into my comment! That was really beautiful. So tragic. It's exactly how I see Bill's feelings. And that's an achievement. Because a lot of A/R doesn't reflect the way I see their relationship or their characters and this does so perfectly.
Wow, you made your way here. I just put these up to practice using Livejournal. So glad to see the ficlets actually being appreciated. :-) I'm more of a meat and potatoes, plot-oriented writer than a lyrical writer, but I decided to experiment stylistically with this piece and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
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Amazing.
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