Ficlet: Kiss the Rain

[i_am_davnee]

Title:  Kiss the Rain
Author:  Davnee
Rating:  K+
Summary:  A quick sketch of the first conversation Bill and Laura ever had about her cancer.  Set on Kobol.  With inspiration from the deleted scene from Home pt. 2.  Special thanks to the wonderful and indispensable unavitasegreta  for making this little piece finally work.

Comments

[snoopy0917]

This is short and sweet and lovely and reads like a "found" moment. Very nicely done.

[i_am_davnee]

Thanks! My muse is being such a pain in the ass that I thought I'd try something short when she wasn't looking.

[i_am_davnee]

You could probably have read it faster than it took you to type this. lol!!

[i_am_davnee]

No, don't stop! Me = Comment Whore ;)

[i_am_davnee]

Thanks! But they are such a beautiful duo that they kind of write themselves.

And those legs ... *daydreaming*

[i_am_davnee]

I've never denied the fact that I am 100% Lauresbian! I keep a uniform for your team in my closet just in case I'm called to bat. ;)

[i_am_davnee]

I'm glad you liked the double entendre. That was the root of my idea for this fic, so I'm glad it came through.

(Remarkably PG for you. Come on. You know I had to say it.)

LOL! Can I substitute in credit for beta'ing unavitasegreta's Kobol smutfic? Would that count?

[i_am_davnee]

It was the first installment in her new smutsplosion. <-- Adore that description for it!! Remember the sex in the rain and the mud.

[franglaisy]

Brilliant! I love this.

“Maybe,” he wavered. “I suppose it could just be post-traumatic stress from the shooting. That or I finally realized you’d just keep escaping from the brig every time I tried to take you back there.”

He found the sound of her laughter oddly moving, as if he’d put something right in the world just by making her happy in this tiny moment stolen from the gloom of this godsforsaken planet. This bit I especially liked.

[i_am_davnee]

Thanks! And I've got to give unavitasegreta credit for helping me with that passage. I was having the hardest time with it and she totally saved the day.