[exo] nightcall

[hyperlydian]

nightcall | sekai (side layhan) | pg13 | angst, fantasy, nightmare(?) au
“hello,” the boy had said, voice echoing on the wind, carried through the air like particles of sand, and jongin had started screaming.

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[changdictator]

unsure where i should leave a comment since you posted this in both aideshou and here...or if I should leave one at all bc unfit to be meandering around your majestical page. but anyways going to sully this place with my messy words hope you no mind ;A;

the first thing that struck me was the sense of ummm WHAM behind the words? i don't know if i've pelted you with compliments on your writing skills yet, because that was what first drew me to your works, but more than that i think the opening of this fic just funneled the energy behind the prose and kind of smacked the readers in the face. at least i certainly felt like it ah.

and then ofc the immense imagery from the nightmares and, this is unrelated, but "The problem with going out in public with Luhan is that his voice only has two levels: loud and screaming." LOL ODG LUHAN WHY, and the parenthetical bits, and I'm really just put at an awe for this bc favorite author ofc writes favorite fic. sobs.

[stadiumsea]

yeeeeeessssSSSSSSSSSSSs since you even brought up the idea of this fic I was rolling around in excitement for it, and this seems like the most practical portrayal of someone with teleportation powers??? and wassup yihan and yes the ocean, always the ocean.

good great excellent I am glad you acc wrote this <333

[seulpeo]

SCREAMS, COHERENCY LATER PLS

[maayacola]

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[playfulmelodies]

hi um okay so this was NOT what I was expecting but I'm glad because this is aMAZING OMFG

I love love LOVE the ending (I had to read it like 5 times LOL) because it's kind of loose and took me a second to figure out what was going on but right now I'm just sitting here flailing around and trying to stay still to type this and gagging at myself and incoherent?

so I think what I'm trying to say is THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE YOU AND THIS FIC ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~; sekai is so sosososososo precious and beautiful and you write them so well ♥♥♥♥♥