[exo] run the heart

[hyperlydian]

run the heart | sekai | pg15 | angst, surfer au
sehun had first met jongin when he was six and his father had decided to humor his obsession with surfing with a trip to the local surf shop on his birthday. (surfer au)

Comments

[helbus_421]

aigoooooo, that was soooo deathly sweet yet very masculine how you wrote this story.
Jongin's insecurities and Sehun's lack of courage really brought out the feelings of want for each other.
and also their relationship was very dude like, that was very endearing, how you captured that. =P

thanks for such a lovely fic, and I hope to read more from you in the future. -3-

[playfulmelodies]

/flails/

this is so cute and sekai and ugh and feels and omg and how to english

I love Jongin in this, how he's vulnerable in his way and how he seems like he doesn't care but he does and SEKAI.

I loved this omg ;;; <3

[flameflowerful]

Beautiful (why doesn't this have more comments? because I felt like I just read art)
"The sunset is purple and orange, bringing out the gold in Jongin’s skin, and all Sehun wants to do is touch and see if any of it rubs off onto his fingertips like metallic dust."
OAO
Such a pretty imagery.

[hyacino]

I really enjoyed this, the relationship was flawless and the whole thing was just gorgeous

[boozeandyogurt]

everything about this is absolutely perfect - just the way your words flow, or the textures you describe, or the vibrancy of the characters, it's all so effortlessly flawless.

i live by the beach, so surfer au's are always welcome, and you wrote this one so beautifully.

besides the whole thing, there are random bits that i just adore, like this one:

Sehun finds him sitting behind the desk reading a comic book, a giant version of the six-year-old Jongin Sehun had seen in the same place twelve years before. Jongin nods when he walks up to the desk, leaning on it like he always does and reaching over to fiddle with the stacks of Sexwax next to the register. Every time he comes in, Sehun fidgets and arranges them differently, by package color, by flavor preference, alphabetically -

idek why i like it so much, but it just works so well

so, so good! :D