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[hyperion_quest]

Don’t try to comfort me when
My streams of sorrow flows
The hurt inside sometimes
I can’t help but let it show
Little badges of misconception
Heartache and tension fall
Away from the pain that caused them

Sometimes I only need to
Let go and let my tears
Wash over my dejection
And take away my fears
I don’t need to hear your soothing
As hollow as your lies
Just

Comments

[mollysixx]

Wow, I didn't know you were into poetry. You never told me that. But I like this poem, nothing professional, but still real nice and simple. But you sound so sad in it. (where the hell are crying emoticons when you need them)?

Hone your skill, and write another cool one. Make it cool, and about sexxy men, like certain men touching glasses and poles professionally. (*sigh)

[hyperion_quest]

Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. It really means more to me that you can imagine. And yes I do love poetry, mostly reading it though, only from time to time I might write something.

I not sure I can do justice to the sexiness of certain individuals boy, they sexiness on whole other level, a whole new world! lol and Inot go tell you to stop watching up my man so :p

[helzfyah]

*crawls out of essay maze*
FREE! I can now comment :p. i liked this poem, it's sad, but i sense strength in it? Ionno a thing about poetry, soo....

But this was my fave line:
Little badges of misconception

I just like how it sounds. XD
♥

[hyperion_quest]

hehehe that's my fav line too :DDD glad you like it *all mandatory blushing duely executed*
and yes there is strength cause as we all know: i am a fighter. it's more like a gimme a minute to let my tears out in privacy cause i won't let 'em see me down.
the rambling ends here ^.^

[helzfyah]

FIGHTS!!!

That's all I have to say really ;P