Alarms & Surprises

[afteriwake]

Title: Alarms & Surprises
Author: Ragna (afteriwake)
Pairing: Orihime-centric, Ishida/Orihime
Rating: PG
Spoilers (if applicable): Goes AU before chapter 448, so there's no spoilers for recent chapters.
Warnings (if applicable): None
Summary: When he showed up on her doorstep she hadn't expected this to happen, but it felt...right.
Authors Notes: Taking a

Comments

[unwritten_icons]

Loved this, the characters and their interaction was true to form; I particularly liked the way you wrote Orihime. I found her nervousness after Hueco Mundo and Tsukishima to be very believable, as was Ishida's offer to stay with her. The kiss was very sweet. A wonderful job, I think.

[afteriwake]

Yay! I wasn't sure it worked out well, so I'm glad I got her voice right.

[heron_advocate]

This is a nice little ficlet. I especially like the way you interpreted the "alarms" part of the prompt. Nice job!

[scandalbaby]

(On another account of mine). Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it. I liked interpreting "alarms" that way, too.

[afteriwake]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

[amorphic]

This was very sweet, especially the ending. ♥ I shall start on the remix soon, hun. =)

[afteriwake]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. And I can't wait to read what you write.

[nypsy2]

not sure how i missed this when posted but so glad a stumbled across it now... really found this lovely. agree the anxiety/fear symptoms were believable, and her reasoning/realization of how both chad & uryuu checked on her but her beloved hadn't demonstrated how she's not ichi's priority was something any girl/woman finally opening her eyes (& stepping off the denial train) would likely do.thx for the kiss.

fan of ichihime too, and read you've been requested to do an ichihime version of this prompt, so i'm gonna be on the lookout for that.

[afteriwake]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

amorphic is probably going to do the IchiHime but I may try my hand at them with this prompt as well.