Dancing in the Rain

Jul 23, 2012 18:05

Dancing in the Rain - 601words ;; Daehyun/Youngjae ;; NC-16
Youngjae is always there for Daehyun, no matter shine or rain.
A/N: daejae drabble for the lovely Kat♥(whose lj idk ;3;), unbeta-ed, prolly filled with mistakes of all sorts. inspired by BAP's Dancing in the Rain. I have no creativity.

you're very sexy baby )

#f: bap, !fanfic, p: daehyun/youngjae

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michyeoganda July 23 2012, 12:38:37 UTC
OKAY UM HAI. I WAS SORT OF GOING FOR THE WHOLE CREEPY EFFECT BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T KNOW MY LJ AND IT WAS FUN THIS WAY AND I NEED TO HURRY UP AND POST MY STUFF ON LJ AND NOW YOU KNOW MY LIVEJOURNAL YAY BUT HAI ANYWAY AND OH LOOK IT'S DAEJAE.

daejae drabble for the lovely Kat♥
OH I SEE THIS. LOVELY KAT? this is better than you calling me mean kat n___n yaaaaaaay

i don't usually read anything that's nc or anything like that (my eyes are only for g/pg/pg-13/anything that's not weird) but i love you and you are special okay, so you are like, the only exception n_________n speshur effie is speshur ^^ (is this another effie to add to the list? n___n)

his left knuckles turned as red as the bouquet of fresh roses gripped tightly in his right as crimson blood flowed out
THIS IS EXACTLY WHY YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO TOUCH THE THORNS OKAY DAEHYUN LIKE WHY WHAT ARE YOU DOING.

but daehyun cannot stop thinking how good youngjae look from the side.
MY DAEJAE HEART. OH MY DAEJAE HEARTTTTTTTTTTT. THAT'S RIGHT DAEHYUN. YOU THINK THAT YOUNGJAE IS JUST SO PRETTY AND IT'S NOT BECAUSE OF THE ALCOHOL OF COURSE IT'S NOT LIKE WHAT AM I SAYING I AM WEIRD.

THIS IS STRANGE. YOUNGJAE IS SUPPOSED TO BE A CUTE LITTLE TEDDY/DURIAN THING WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO HIM EFFIE. SHARED APARTMENT?! DO THEY ALREADY LIVE TOGETHER? SDFKLLKSDJFLKJDFSLKJD ARE DAEJAE LIKE BEST FRIENDS BECAUSE DAEJAE BEING BEST FRIENDS IS THE CUTEST THING EVER AND EVEN IF THEY AREN'T BEST FRIENDS HERE, I'M GONNA PRETEND THAT THEY ARE BECAUSE DAEJAE FOREVER OKAY AND WHAT IS PUNCTUATION ;A;

OKAY. I LOVE YOU BECAUSE YOU SAID THAT YOU DON'T WRITE DAEJAE BUT LOOK EFFIE, THIS IS DAEJAE EVEN THOUGH YOU SAID THAT YOU DON'T EVEN SHIP DAEJAE BUT LOOK DAEJAE AND I'M RUNNING OUT OF WORDS LIKE WHY.

minutes had passed as they continued laying on the floor. clouds started to cover the sky with a slight red glow, as daehyun felt raindrops on his face.
i like this. it's as if time is continuously moving on in the world around them, but when it comes to daehyun, he just sits there, because time has stopped and he doesn't want to do anything, because of the break up and time stops for him because of all the negative things that happened. and then afterwards, time stopping in daehyun's world because a positive thing, because it's like it's only youngjae and daehyun in their world and that's all that matters (AND IT'S DAEJAEEEEE)

Okay~ i really love your narrative of the way that time had continued, and they had carried on. it's like, at the beginning, daehyun just felt like his world had stopped because of his girlfriend leaving him, and this was shown as he just fell to the floor, and didn't get up (UNTIL YOUNGJAE CAME OKAY LOOK OTP OTP OTP) i just basically really love the change in time, though the time span wasn't physically long, it was long enough for youngjae to be able to pick daehyun up, and for youngjae to be able to push daehyun forward so that he doesn't dwell on that girl; and so that daehyun can move on (BECAUSE YOUNGJAE IS HERE AND DAEJAE4LYF OKAY)

OKAY. SO I LOVE DAEJAE AND I LOVE YOU SO THIS IS WHY EFFIE WRITING DAEJAE IS A BIG THING AND OH MY GOSH THIS IS BAD BECAUSE I'M WRITING YOU A HIMLO AND IT'S GONNA BE SO BAD AND I HOPE YOU DON'T CRY AT IT BECAUSE OF IT'S TERRIBLE-NESS (OH LOOK. NOW I'M MAKING WORDS UP. THIS IS NOT GOOD). BUT YEAH. THANK YOU EFFIE ♥

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hyeonseong July 23 2012, 14:42:03 UTC
you are lovely!!!!! (and mean at times :c and also creepy heehehwehehehehehe)

im sorry i forgot you are not of age yet 8( BUT YAYYYYY SPECIALEFFIE!!!

they are best friends!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh god kat, why are you thinking too much :3
oh and im sorry if i see youngjae as a sexgod loljk but DURIANYOUNGJAE IS DA BEST Q___Q FATYOUNGJAE4LYFE. (sorry i got carried away and made him erotic 8{D)

I DIDNT SAY I DONT WRITE DAEJAE. I SAY I DONT REALLY SHIP THEM.

i like this. it's as if time is continuously moving on in the world around them, but when it comes to daehyun, he just sits there, because time has stopped and he doesn't want to do anything, because of the break up and time stops for him because of all the negative things that happened. and then afterwards, time stopping in daehyun's world because a positive thing, because it's like it's only youngjae and daehyun in their world and that's all that matters
your description its so.... flawless Q_Q

im glad that you liked it and IM VERY SURE YOUR HIMLO IS GOING TO TURN OUT PERFECTLY FINE AND FLAWFREE AND BE SO MUCH BETTER THAN MINE!!!!

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michyeoganda July 23 2012, 16:17:13 UTC
psh~~~ i only agree with the mean kat hahahha ^^

that's okay! it wasn't too um... inappropriate so it's fine! n____n

i am not thinking too much what are you saying? ;a; but daejae are best friend forever okay n__n (and you even said yourself that you only like friendship!daejae! so~~~~~ daejae = ultimate brotp ^^)
YOUNGJAE IS JUST PRETTY AND CUTE OKAY. DURIANYOUNGJAE AND FATYOUNGJAE ARE THE BEST HAHAHHAHAHA

THAT IS BASICALLY THE SAME THING OKAY. WELL IT IS RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I WAS JUST HAVING A LOT OF FEELS OKAY. DAEJAE FOREVERRRRR

that description was not flawless okay. i just realised that the comment made no sense whatsoever and that's embarrassing because it should make sense but it doesn't ;A;

my himlo is going to be very fail... like it's gonna be unbelievably fail....................................................... AND IT WON'T BE BETTER THAN YOURS, WATER YOU TALKING ABOUT? u________u

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hyeonseong July 24 2012, 05:09:52 UTC
shut up kat 8( your himlo is definitely gonna be better than mine!!!!!!!!! :p

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