fiction from the fan's point of view

[huskandashes]

This is just a little bit of fanfic that I threw together at two in the morning a couple of days ago. We can all blame silverpenlight for prompting it, though I think her prompt was something like "Jack and Shepard getting drunk and shooting things and being ridiculous!", so I'm willing to share some of the blame for the more...odd elements of the fic

Comments

[betareject]

OMG This is brilliant!! Oh I've been dying for some good friendship!fic on Jack and Shepard and you certainly did not disappoint. My word you have her voice down so perfectly (and its so nice ot see another Jack fan out there! *high5*). You really captured her personality and voice so perfectly I could just hear it so loud and clear when I was reading this. Not to mention I loved how these two bonded over some hard drinks and blowing things up hehe just how I envisioned my head!M!Shep too XD

Even more amusing in that oddly endearing way was Shepard's drunken admittance to having feelings for Tali (I love that pairing like woah) and Jack's sound advice hahaha She's such a brat I love it. Its just too bad we don't get to see what followed HAHAH I can just envision Tali's expression too upon being witnessing her drunken commander professing his affections for her XD I'd pay to see that too HAHAHHA

Brilliant job with this and kudos for the amazing characterization of Jack its so nice to see another fan of her and one who writes her so well might I add! m(_ _)m