Empty

Aug 30, 2009 22:21

Changmin pulls the gun away.

“Empty.” He whispers.

Yoochun sobs as Changmin continues to hold him against the wall.  “Are you ready to go?” Yoochun moves into Changmin’s arms, nodding.  “Good.”  They hear footstep and “Jaejoong-sshi!!”  Changmin growls as Yoochun’s fist his shirt, tightly.

The door flies open and everyone screams at the sight ( Read more... )

pairing: changmin/yoochun, author: insomoleptic

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secretly_kanna August 31 2009, 02:50:37 UTC
mariaaaaaaa~~

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gompi August 31 2009, 02:53:03 UTC
hahahaha

*screams cause of icon*

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yoochunlove August 31 2009, 05:07:13 UTC
oh my gosh, spot. ♥

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yoochunlove August 31 2009, 05:14:42 UTC
i'm pressed on time, but i'll make an awesome comment :)

changmin, omg, why is he so cool, even when he's mad it makes me want to fall of f my chair in a ball of giggles XD and then when he was all like threatening with yunho, that was fuckin' awesome.

i love how yoochun's uke-like qualities make him so vulnerable 8D

freakin' damn it, why are you so good? ♥ i totally envy your minchun writing, best i've ever read 8D8D8D.

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gompi August 31 2009, 05:29:06 UTC
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nono this was.... thank you

you'e making it hard for me to speak /covers face

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roadcraze August 31 2009, 05:55:38 UTC
holy.

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gompi August 31 2009, 06:08:26 UTC
?

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ephemeral_blue August 31 2009, 06:32:54 UTC
“Empty.” He whispers.
THANK YOU. I mean, I didn't think you would have Changmin kill him but… you're kinda crazy sometimes so I wasn't putting it past you to torture me like that!

“Do I seem mad?”
“Yes.”
“Well I’m furious.”
“Oh…With me?”
“Don’t fucking play stupid.”
“I’m sorry.”
I really really love this conversation, just cause you know Changmin's mad and I love it and he's so fucking when he's mad.

Changmin never been compared to anyone before, especially not in a negative light. You’re like Junsu, I’m just here for your fucking pleasure, aren’t I?!! Changmin growls to himself as Yoochun’s voice echoes in his head. It just wouldn’t stop. How many things did he do that Yoochun compared to Junsu? How he walked, how he dressed, how he talked, how he fucked him. He’s never been jealous before. Was he not good enough? Especially not of someone who’s dead.So totally quoting entire thing because it's such an important part of how exactly Changmin's feeling and it's amazing. I absolutely loooove that he's completely ( ... )

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ephemeral_blue August 31 2009, 06:34:26 UTC
“I want a new mission.”
Running away from his feelings instead of facing them like a man. What a fucking coward.

Changmin glares at him, “Whatever. Do what you want. But if you touch him, I will know.”
Gotta love him though.

Guilt finally hits Changmin as he stands outside his apartment door.
Good you asshole. And I hope it eats you alive.

“I’m sorry.” He whispers into Yoochun’s ear, “I didn’t mean any of it.” Yoochun snorts a little in his sleep and Changmin kisses his cheek, “I swear I mean it.”
And this is just gorgeous and beautiful and almost makes up for it. Almost.

Yoochun opens his mouth a few times. “I-I started the bath for you.”
I think I prefer this more than anything else he could've said because it just seems to normal like even for the time being, he's forgotten what Changmin has done and drawing a bath for him is just what he does after a hard days work ( ... )

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gompi August 31 2009, 06:42:25 UTC
/covers face

you're seriously like making me blush here!!!

the ending was another of those last minute touches

don't die~~/pokes

i can just imagine if I called this fail

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ephemeral_blue August 31 2009, 06:46:32 UTC
Which is HILARIOUS that you say that because I wrote something about you calling it a fail and mentioning things that kinda sounded like death threats but since you DIDN'T mention it was a fail... I erased it! LOL

This has happened many times before that you've read my mind.

I think I'm scared now ♥

And you should blush! You're wonderful!

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pawshingo August 31 2009, 06:50:36 UTC
Despite the jealousy (?) Changmin feels, he thinks Yoochun's comparing him to the late (LOL) Junsu and anger, he still manages to act cool and warn Yunho to stay away fr his Yoochun! Cool! I really like Changmin written this way! REally do! Yoochun, whimpering, timid and after what Changmin did, he waited and prepared a bath for Minnie. I was almost afraid he won't be there waiting for his Changmin, glad he was! Gonna reread (yup) 1-3 again!

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gompi August 31 2009, 06:53:51 UTC
Changmin cares..... he's just an idiot.... who can't control his emotions

He had to warn Yunho or else~~ Yunho might crazy~

have fun~ Glad you liked it <3

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