This is the most intriguing combination of complete and utter hotness and a very insightful character study. I love it! The last two or three sections most of all, really, when Neal finally lets go of all control. Also Mozzie in the beginning - his thoughts at Sara learning from Neal and that last bit, hilarious! Left me with the most gigantic grin on my face :D. And I also have to mention Neal being cocky despite all the earlier situations she put him into, including the shears! Basically, this entire fic. Yes. Love.
thank you so much for reading and your kind feedback! this all started with the millionth time I watched that kissing scene in the archives, and mozzie's interruption, and it just kind of grew out of control from there. but I do think neal does always seem like he can't let go of control.
This should have bedtime reading instead of just got up reading. Besides being HOT, it really is well written. Like the perspective that Neal needs a place and time where he can really let go. Peter may has his tiger El, but Neal has his (trying for right word hmm) queen. Of course, it's Mozzie that provides the insight and motivation, she can't resist the challenge, for Sara.. Wonder if he had any hidden cameras?!
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thank you!
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