OP Fic: Nothing to Choose (Part 4)

Dec 16, 2009 22:51

Title: Nothing to Choose - Part 4
Author: hunterwithcause
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing/Characters: Strawhat Pirates
Genre/Category: What If?
Rated: PG-13
Word count: 595
Warnings: Character death
Spoilers/Setting: Set at an unspecific time after Thriller Bark
Disclaimer:One Piece does not belong to me.

Summary: A sum is made up of many parts. Take one part away and ( Read more... )

fic: one piece, fic series: nothing to choose

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schokoccino December 17 2009, 22:04:11 UTC
Okay, then it was a legitimate question xD I don't know... maybe because it's english and you're a discriminator of german language? xD Or we are wiser know *cough*

Shush! I'm young-at-heart :P I'm getting plump and taut and you will be wrinkled and haggard!

Well, I thought that would come, because you weren't so sure about Robin, Franky and Brook ^^ But the final plan is like it was, isn't it? It would be really really sad if you plan to change the termination... But I also think that if you are going to change it the new idea will be also great (in any case I hope so xD)... Will you change it? (Yes or No is enough... I don't want to spoiler or something. That isn't fun)

Oh, oh, is Miss self-appointed greenhorn trying to use some sarcasm there? xD As if I would hear something like that all the time! *cough* And anyway: Are you jealous of my little brother with his dorky crackbrained childish and strange fancifulness? Would you like to have such awesome ideas, which no one else would be so stupid to tell anyone ever had? ;P

Oh... I actually don't know myself... I just read it again and I don't know xD It's a little strange with the shouts and the hands all over the place... Forget about it ^^

Well, honestly: YES! Because if your grades drop my increasing grades will get more attention and maybe (if I push J. falls down the stairway...) I will be the class winner *diabolic laugh*

Oh, you did? Well, good to know xD With my guinea pig you I can do it.
Did you know that I love to scratch everything out? And italics? And change in size? xD I love it all <3

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hunterwithcause December 18 2009, 17:30:43 UTC
Me? Can't be, you're the discriminator! xD

Oh, wait, I get it, it's like, you're using irony? Say one thing but mean the complete opposite? Then yes, I agree, you're very young. Very young.

The last two parts will be the same, and the rest will be more or less the same. The only one really affected is the Franky part which will be less depressing than what I had originally planned (I think xD).

Of course I'm jealous of your brother! But then, I don't have to bother, seeing as you promised me his hand in marriage. Now I can cherry-pick his most insane ideas and make them my own! *OMG so evil laugh*

No, c'mon, tell me! I'm feeling bad now! :( And it's entirely your fault! 4rlz!

To tell the truth, it's not J. I've got a problem with... *glares further to the right* YOU WILL NEVER WIN!!!! xD

Striking things out is fun! But you're still weird! xD

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schokoccino December 18 2009, 18:46:08 UTC
Well, good that I can't remember your idea for the Franky part *cough* I'm really relieved that you won't change something important xD Especially the last one as I like it so much - before you even wrote it!

That's some good news ^^ I almost thought that you would reject my request to marry my brother... So I only have to force persuade him and it will be perfect! I already love it <3 One of my dear friends will be my sister-in-law... Wait... O.O Holy cow!

Now I know what confused me: The thing with to trip over her own hands. It's quite funny in my POV and so I was little puzzled because I didn't think it should be funny, but it is (to me)... a little bit xD A small joke within a depressing all-will-die-scenario... Sounds weird, did you understand? ^^''

You mean S.? Is he really that good in english that he beats you AND J.? Are you serious? o.O

Weird? Do you really want to call me that? Are you really sure? ---- Well, your right. But you're the same. Live with that! :P

I thought I reduce the nonsense topics which run out of references to OP or your fic by making them small xD (And because I wanted to make something small!)

Edit: That wasn't fault xD I only had to send it twice because Firefox told me the side wasn't there (or some sh*** like that -.-)

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hunterwithcause December 18 2009, 21:05:57 UTC
Just don't tell him until the wedding. He'll be so overwhelmed he'll say yes out of sheer confusion. No, I haven't read a fic set in ancient Egypt which mentioned arranged marriage, no sir, not me!

Ah, I see. I know it sounds kind of weird but if you think about it, it makes sense; Robin summoned arms to keep her in place when the ship was rocked but didn't disspell them afterwards, so when she instinctly moved towards Chopper she tripped over them. But just reading that sentence it sounds kinda ridiculous xD

Okay, that's it, we HAVE to start making a system so it's clear whether we talk about first-row J. or last-row J.! I was talking about the one in the first row! Okay, I screwed up with the directions, anyhow; it should have been *glares to the left of J.* This is getting confusing!

Oh sure, you say that now... Just admit it, you're cyber-stalking me! xD

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schokoccino December 18 2009, 21:59:43 UTC
That's quite really possible xD He maybe would do so... Just as you don't waste time to watch all kind of YGOTAS, right?

Yep. I know it fits within the story and all but you see my point, don't you? It was kind of: "What? What makes that there? It makes sense, but... really?" It's ridiculous (like you said)... and I think it's more confusing because it really fits in but, however, it's hilarious. I can't help that :)

Absolutely! My suggestion is Jo for the first-row J. and simply J. [spoken: Jay] for the last-row as I think that maybe we will talk more about J. as about Jo (or maybe I write an entry about how I dislike some of my classmates? Today I wanted to do this... because I wanted to kill socially-incompatible-M., who was sitting next to me on the train... damned!)

Anyway, is Jo better than you? I know, that he is an arrogantly blowhard and I - sometimes -shouldn't believe what he's talking about, but he told me once that he isn't quite good at english...At a time in which we could still talk normally to each other and I didn't know that any problems are void except his own.

Err... No? xD That would be waste so much time I don't have... normally.

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