While These Visions Did Appear (8/8)

[hunters_retreat]

He knew where he was as soon as he opened his eyes. He sat up slowly in bed, taking in the ratty motel and the way his bag was set on the edge of the table. His bag and no other. He looked at the other bed that was still clean, covers neatly folded in place. In the trash can he could see the tops of beer bottles and he knew instinctively it

Comments

[akadougal]

Always love some surprise Wincest. I liked how confused Sam was when he found out they were brothers. I'm confused though - did John know about them or not? I kinda want a little bit from his point of view.

[hunters_retreat]

I decided early on that with the amnesia it would probably be easier to read and keep track of things from one POV, especially in the very beginning. I wouldn't rule out a few timestamps from an outside POV eventually though (like John or Bobby :P Personally, i'm dieing to get inside Bobby's head while he was reading that file with the boys up in the room alone :P)

I wrote it so that John didn't witness anything explicit, but John is pretty smart and while the boys were pretty discrete around most hunters, it's possible that rumors were flying around about the two :P So... John may know, but Sam and Dean don't think so. Yeah.. that was a really long way of saying it depends on how smart you think John is :P

[mystik_ivanow]

Oh, this was awesome. Amnesia!Wincest is always fun to read and the way you did was so cool! I specially liked the elements of the first season you three on the story. =D

Good one, added to memories!

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! I wanted to play up the idea that they knew everything else about that life, just not anything about themselves. I love that Dean is still a caretaker, not just because of past events because that's just who he is. I love the idea that Sam's hatred of hunting isn't about the hunt at all, but about his father and the things he considered stolen from him because of it. So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

[isla_verdad]

I love amnesia fics. And hot teenchesters. So, win! :)

[hunters_retreat]

LOL! Thank you so much! It was so much fun to play with the boys like this!!

[ariss_tenoh]

Very nicely done. The amnesia and the characterization was handled well and it was a lot of fun to read^_^

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! I struggled with the beginning for a while, but in the end I decided that one of the things John had always instilled on them was the need to push through, to get on with the job, and that is what got them moving when they didn't remember who they were, that ingrained sense of purpose and the need to keep moving. Which just made it that more fun at the end to throw is all back on them as they were trying to figure out who they were :P So glad you liked it hon! Thank you!

[kuhekabir]

this was an excellent twist on things! Thanks for sharing :)

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! I became taken with amnesia fics lately and this was my answer to that :P So glad you enjoyed it!