While These Visions Did Appear (5/8)

[hunters_retreat]

They didn’t talk to John after that, but Dean and Sam both thought they’d come off well from the experience. John’s journal had been of interest to both of them and Dean spent a lot of time jotting down his memories of their hunts to organize them into a coherent book of his own. Sam added what he could, as Dean would write it down in his own

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[soymade]

Hey,

reading this and enjoying it. Just wanted to point out that at one point you compare Sam to a child who "needed protected" from monsters; I think you mean "needed protection" or "needed to be protected".

:)