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[hungrytiger11]

Ah! I am Sooooo tired of this writer's block I've got going on. Its not like I don't have stories and plots to tell either. It just all comes out as junk. And this weekend, I'm over at my (internet-less) Grandmother's, taking care of her after a bad fall. This means, lots of time on my hands and, unless I care to start reading the millions of

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[indira14]

Sighhhh~ This was such a nice read~ I can't believe how much I've missed your writing. it's been way too long - I'm just glad you're writing again, despite the writer's block.

I can sort of pick up a ~vibe~ that tells me whether the writer was frustrated while writing a particular piece, so I'm a bit awed you can write this well even with writer's block hovering over your shoulders. O.O

I think... my favourite was Sasuke/Hanabi. Not the teams seven one, but Sasuke/Hanabi. Definitely. How in the world do you constantly make Hanabi so awesome and believable, despite the fact that we see so little of her?

"Late, but not out of time" is such a difficult concept to work with (as in, the kind of concepts that makes writers wonder if they'll be able to do it justice), but you really pulled it off. I love on how hopeful a note it ended - and your Sakura is, well--

“Remember sensei?” she’d said. “Always making us wait! I secretly sort of loved it, even if I hated it more. Gave me a chance to talk to you, hope you’d talk back. Desperate in love with you. You know- then. And, and, Naruto, trying to get my attention and yours and- what a mess we were. Still are.”

--this is the most believable characterization I've seen of her in some time. It's strange: even if there was nothing in there to suggest if she was nervous or just talking to Sasuke for the sake of communicating with him in someway, I can tell how she was feeling at the moment just by reading those words. Does that make sense?

And as always, your Hyuuga-centric works are ♥. (I notice you're writing from a more Uchiha-Hyuuga perspective now *___*)

Especially this: At clan functions the three of the them, the young Uchiha and the Hyuuga girls, would be pushed together, an awkward threesome of sullenness and little conversation. - Hell yes. *___*

So, excellent work! I'll be waiting to see more from you soon~♥

[hungrytiger11]

I'm glad you liked them!

Weirdly, the Late fic was going to be (yet another) SasuHina piece, but changing it to Sakura felt much truer. Ummmm, as for Uchiha/Hyuuga, its just the clan politics give so much potential. I think that any match between any hyuuga or Uchiha would be motivated by politics, though I think Hinata might come to care for Sasuke, or Itachi or whomever. Neji, would always pine for Hinata. There'd be a lot of UST.....

I think Hanabi would totally agree to marry him but have no plan to put out thereby 1) protecting Hinata from marrying Sasuke 2) getting revenge for his hurting people she loved and 3) stopping the clan from getting any protegeny (well, legitimate ones anyway). She's sneaky like that.