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Prompt Challenge #001: Painful Attraction

Jan 18, 2012 01:22

Title: Painful Attraction
Author: K1M333
Rating: PG because of a few bad words
Genre: Introspection?
Pairing/Character(s): Doumeki (with mentions of Watanuki, Haruka, Himawari and Yuuko)
Prompt Challenge: # 001 Unfinished Business
Medium: Fic

( Late fill is late... )

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Comments 4

flakedice January 18 2012, 15:31:13 UTC

You got it up before I've posted the next prompt, so you just made it ;D

One of your first? I would never have guessed :) You've captured Doumeki nicely - I love that catelogue of the things he has to put up with accompanying Watanuki. Permanent hearing impairment XD Fantastic job, my dear! :D

k1m333 January 18 2012, 23:42:14 UTC

Phew! I'm glad I made it! I'll try to post in advance next time! (The keyword being try...)

Well, I did spend a lot of time changing and adding things to the first version, so it's much more detailed now than it was before - and better built, too. It's nice to see how much my English language has improved since then. XD Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! (^_^)

silent_skies100 January 18 2012, 15:34:16 UTC

/And then he met Watanuki./

xD

This was so well-written! I LOVED the attention to detail you gave to each of Doumeki's injuries, and I really liked the connection you made between his childhood and current state of affairs. :)

The title made me laugh after I finished reading this. :D

I'm so excited to read more from you.

k1m333 January 19 2012, 00:01:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it! (^_^) In the series, we clearly see Doumeki get hurt to protect Watanuki, but there is not much emphasis put on his injuries. I wanted to explore that.
Héhé, I'm glad the title made you laugh! I'm rather proud of it. =P
Aw, you're so kind! I'll try not to disappoint you! (^_~)