Dating 801
A/N: Wrote this almost two weeks ago because Stephan unnir gave me the 'random fluff' challenge, which was to write something and finish it within one day (or something like that). I surprisingly managed to come up with something kind of decent and pretty long, but was lazy to post it then, so here it is. YAY :>
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( Taeyeon was particularly intelligent. )
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( Taeyeon was particularly intelligent. )
To be honest, I think it really sweet that Taeyeon's first attempt at love turned out so well, just like everything in her life in this story. She's really blessed indeed.
Daebak story description, by the way; I could really imagine every scene in the story in my mind's eye as it progressed. Bravo!
Thank you very much for crafting and posting this story here, my dear friend. You have made my day!
Right, until the next one then, take care and Cheers!
Kenneth.
(P.S. I spotted some typos that you may want to edit (or not):
1) looking over to counter right across from her table - “over to the counter”?
2) assumed to be the dressing code - “dress code”?
3) she never had worries quite of this extend when she had her thesis - “quite to this extent when”?
4) wanting to delay her leave - “leaving”?
5) Time flew passed - “past”?
6) even though she probably still would have wanted to do so if it wasn’t along the way - “so even if it wasn’t”?
7) Their new relationship status reminded her that - “her of that”?
8) She wondered that often - “wondered about that”?)
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