Picking on Heartstrings

May 13, 2013 21:14

Hi. It's been a while. :)

This one's actually my first time, writing in present tense. Never again. orz

Again, dedicating this to Tipco, Kaia, Pistol, Wolfie and Baby vy. <3

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There she is. )

taeny, taeyeon, fanfiction, tiffany, two-shot, snsd

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anonymous May 13 2013, 16:38:03 UTC
Re-read the fic n try to give a new comment, hopefully this comment is not too boring ><"

Similar to my previous comment, the best part of this fic is when u describe how Taeyeon and Tiffany look.
The starting paragraph on how Taeng looked makes my imagination run wild, Taeng dressing up as average girl-next-door is simply too adorable~
I like the amount of dedication Fany put into this relationship, she din't even manage to ask for Taeng's name before asking her out, and even after realizing how silly she must've been, she waited patiently, anxiously under the freezing snow all because of that shimmer of hope, which paid off <3
I like that drama u put in which reversed the roles of who's trying to court the other~
I kind off feel bad for Taeyeon because from what i see she really have no clue she upset Fany just being enjoying the attention.
Also i'm glad how she is willing to put aside her guitar =) i think that showed how much she cares n i thought its relly sweet ^___^

I'm over commenting now ><" i believe my comment on SSF was way better but thanks for writing this oneshot for 1527! ^___^

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humyourheart May 20 2013, 14:06:45 UTC
There's never such a thing as over commenting :) Thank you, I appreciate that you're re-commenting for this ;A;

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