Sixteen Hours To None (2/2)

Oct 05, 2012 05:50

A/N; Here's part 2.<3 I apologize if it disappoints. (also around 5K words)

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taeny, taeyeon, fanfiction, tiffany, two-shot, snsd

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humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:02:55 UTC
JERK TAEYEON \O/

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humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:02:36 UTC
You're such a tease, even when you comment. Heol. xD Lol. I'll try to keep it platonic and all. But of course, you being Aivy and all; so irresistible and all that competition with your admirers too... tsk tsk tsk. Wouldn't wanna get into that whole mess. xD

You don't find it rushed? YAY. :D AND NO, I WASN'T THINKING OF US.... Well, not consciously, anyway.... (are you scared now? >:D) Hahaha.

DONT "JI-" ME, DAN- THENINTHTRACK. Suave, rofl. I found that a little corny and surprisingly you liked it. xD Nice. The day I try that on guys, it'll definitely be a story to tell.

Hehehe, thank you for all your kind words. <33333 /hugs/

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lae96 October 5 2012, 02:20:48 UTC
Hello,this was a great shot/story.I like how they met and how they slowly developed their relationship.I liked the ending how Taeyeon just walked up to Tiffany and grabbed her wrist pulling her to the bathroom to wash up.They didn't need words.I kept on smiling from then on.Good job well done!Thank you for sharing.

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humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:04:08 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thank -you- for commenting. ^^

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nana_the_dwarf October 5 2012, 05:45:13 UTC
This made me grin like a goof before going to sleep.
Thank you.

Zzzzzz...

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humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:04:38 UTC
Reading before bed is the best! :D

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anonymous October 5 2012, 05:58:51 UTC
The way you describe TaeNy's interaction and love is just so sweet. I like how they started off as acquaintances, then friends, then they acknowledge their special feelings for each other, before they finally put a label on their relationship as girlfriends. I like the way they don't immediately become physically intimate and how they just know that they love each other despite the occasional insecurity especially from Tiffany. But, what I like most about your story is that it does not gloss over the dark realities in a same gender relationship. I think this is one of the few fics that don't treat such relationship as if societal/parental pressure against it were non-existent.

Taeyeon being so casual in making up with Tiffany after the fight, makes me smile so much. I can actually picture her that way in real life. However, I cannot picture Tiffany being as docile in a fight. Hahaha! -Tipco

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I have no idea if you'd see this but I'll reply anyway. humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:08:54 UTC
I tried to write it step by step without rushing their relationship.. which was why it became a two-shot instead of one. xD Long stories are long.

And yeah, the thing about same gender relationships are that, contrary to some beliefs, they are still pretty much frowned upon. Especially when our generations' parents are still of the older generations. Not only that, I think even among the newer generation, the concept of same gender relationships wouldn't be -that- openly accepted.

One has to give in in a fight to work it out. xD

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ah_thien October 5 2012, 06:25:20 UTC
THIS WAS AWESOME,
Sulking migget & a smitten Fany.
I loved this, & i hope to see more of your Taeny fics (:

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humyourheart October 6 2012, 07:09:30 UTC
Thank you! I'll try writing more. :)

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