Resolution

[hugsuzie]

Here's the first chapter of something I've been wanting to write for so long. It isn't a long story!!

Comments

[cornflake2912]

Nice start. Does it mean that Jack is dead? :( *cries*

[hugsuzie]

Yeah, I'm afraid it does. Sorry!!! :( :( Perhaps I should have made that more clear.. It's my way of scraping some sort of a happy ending out of Ang's film, so nothing gets changed, just added to...

[cornflake2912]

I see. So is it a MO!Ennis story? can't read that though please warn me.

[cornflake2912]

[suzysue2]

Great start! A few typos, but nothing serious. You have got the feel and mood of the OS though, which is excellent. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

[hugsuzie]

Thanks Suzy, even though it's based on the film I did try to mimic Annie's lovely style! (rolls eyes at self for typos)

Good start and looking forward to more

[joetheone]

Ok this was a good start, I liked how you described the sad and miserable trailer and the package wrapped by his own hands for Junior's wedding and all. I loved how he was stubborn and had to get that hat back and climb down and get hurt in the process. You have a good thing going on here. Joe

Re: Good start and looking forward to more

[hugsuzie]

Thanks Joe! Yes Ennis doesn't know when he's beat sometimes! Glad you enjoyed reading it!
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[ramona4jake]

Interesting start ! definitely want to read more - what year starts your story ?
Thank you for sharing !

[hugsuzie]

Glad you liked! As some have guessed already the story has started on the day of Junior's wedding.

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Interesting

[siri2000]

Interesting start. I would like to learn a bit more of this encounter of Ennis and Jack.
Siri

Re: Interesting

[hugsuzie]

Thanks for commenting - of course you'll learn more! Young Jack and Ennis in the mountains together? How could I resist!!! :D

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