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Acts of Contrition (7/20)

Nov 14, 2007 23:41

His own breathing is too loud in the small space, the familiar press of the harness against his chest and the comm in his ear failing to ground him.

“Green Leader, this is Green One,” Changmin leans forward, flicking forward shields into place, trying to ignore the slide of sweat down his spine, the unfamiliarity and antiquity of the controls ( Read more... )

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figmagination November 14 2007, 23:21:10 UTC

That's my Yunho! His apathy was kind of scaring me a bit there. Changmin... hang in there. *sympathy*

rawthorne November 17 2007, 14:03:52 UTC

Aww, Changmin is strong. He'll survive. He has to, right?

Thanks for reading! More coming in an hour or so. Depending how quick I can post.

luvmeanddespair November 14 2007, 23:58:50 UTC

Junsu and Yunho's escape was awesome!! :D

He used to be one of them, he thinks. Tags heavy against his chest, pride all the weightier. A purpose, a future.

Loved that. Poor, Min. *pets him*

♥

rawthorne November 17 2007, 14:05:38 UTC

Thank you so much! We love that you love.

Min is so conflicted, poor boy. It'll get better. Or worse, depends on how you look at it. :D

sharkbait_ha November 15 2007, 00:47:41 UTC

oh my. oh my. oh my. I don't know how to express my love for this fic~
*glomps*
amazingness~!

rawthorne November 17 2007, 14:06:16 UTC

This is making me giggle. Thank you, thank you! Keep reading. More is coming.

capslocklove November 15 2007, 01:44:37 UTC

I seriously love the fast updates. Y'all are amazing~

I can't wait for them to find Changmin! XD

rawthorne November 17 2007, 14:06:56 UTC

Another fast update is on its way. In like an hour.

You think they'll find Changmin? Maybe Changmin'll find them? Who knows? XD

Thanks for reading!

capslocklove November 17 2007, 15:26:05 UTC

You think they'll find Changmin? Maybe Changmin'll find them? Who knows? XD

GASP! I didn't even think of that! D: Now you've got me on the edge of my seattttt

sum3r November 15 2007, 05:24:50 UTC

*runs off to read all the chapters*
this story gets interesting by the minute! now that Min on their side now, i wonder how Yunho and Junsu will act when they find out? ^^
hmmm... and yAy they escaped XD ~!
♥ ♥

butterflyweb November 18 2007, 03:49:23 UTC

Changmin's loyalties are going to be a slippery slope for all of them, it seems. :) Thanks for the review and keep reading!