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[butterflyweb]

Two pairs of dark eyes meet his across the small clearing, rising from concealed spaces to reveal themselves and their weapons-almost antiquated plasma rifles-raised and ready to fire. Changmin feels a small spike of fear drive through him, for once letting it show on his features.

I’m a kid, he thinks desperately, as if willing the thought to

Comments

[sharkbait_ha]

This is so intense. :D <3

[rawthorne]

Hehe, hope you like tense, then! Thanks for the review. More to come soon.

[zelshamada]

Wow .__.U Even I was very worry for Yunho! ^^UU
And Changmin... just because JaeChun is always problems!

[butterflyweb]

Lol, JaeChun are always trouble, it's true. :))

Thanks for reviewing, and look for chapter three! Should be up soon.

[the_calen]

Oh wow. I'm typically skittish of AUs, but this is amazing. If not for the promise of OT5, I'd be really worried about Changmin; even so, the feeling is still heavy.
:D :D I'll be stalking the comm for updates.

[rawthorne]

That means a lot to us. Thanks for the feedback. We did promise OT5 and we will deliver. In due time.

Stay tuned. Next update should be up tomorrow if all goes according to plan.

[timbong]

I see JaeChun! I bet they would have sex in front of Changmin to tempt him, because they are evil and kinky like this.

This chapter is rather intense, especially with Yunho's current mindset. Can't wait to see how he ends up getting into the mess of Changmin again.

[butterflyweb]

They are wicked, aren't they? But I'm not telling...

Thanks for your words and stay tuned!

[theresa_lynne]

Wow. This is really good. I'm not that into Sci-fi stuff, but I'm anxiously awaiting more HoMin. :P

[rawthorne]

Thanks for taking the time to comment. There will be more HoMin in the future. We promise ;)