part 3 8DDDD

[shinyasangel]

This chapter was really.. really hard to write. But here it is~~~~~

Title: The Time After
Pairings: none yet
Rating: NC-17
Author: shinyasangel
Summary: Just read.
Past Part(s): Prologue | Part 1 : Only Me. | Part 2 : On Your Feet Again

Comments

[zeroalexis]

just the end, where he looks dead kills me...(kills me in a "OMG NO!" way)...just poor baby...ugh no...

this was brutal and harsh

great writing.

[shinyasangel]

yes.. it was painful to write ;o;

thank you <3

[zeroalexis]

;o; I bet.

welcome. <3

[tokyo_hanabi]

;___; poor Changmin ;o; I loved your writing though... his reaction was very realistic and moving e_e; poor boy .__. should've gotten the hell outta there *can never think of a good enough comment* it was awesome ^^; wonder what will happen next...

one thing, if the old guy was wearing a condom, wouldn't that have caught all his... release >_o rather than have it in Changmin? :x

[shinyasangel]

mmmm.. not necessarily. though I did overlook that.. >>;; hmm.. condom broke?? 8x ^^;;; thanks for pointing out something I hadn't thought of .___.

and thank you.. it took many tries to get it right <3

[insumatt]

lol yanno i wondered about that too, at each reading, but i was like uhmmm... should i nitpick THIS too 8D;

[shinyasangel]

>/ you should have! 8DDDD ah well~ so teh condom broke >.> heh.. .____________________.

[pho7be]

omfg i'm almost crying.
i just went to a women's workshop yesterday for self-defense/knowledge against rapists.
so i'm pretty fresh with all the pissed-off-ness of guys like that.

stupid, fucking, filthy,creature!!

that was amazing writing.

but god, that makes me angry.
AKSDJF!!!

[shinyasangel]

8x that was the affect I was going for~~

yes.. I hate that man >/ I hate this chapter but at the same time I'm proud of it. it was such a challenge '~'

-wants to hug Min and make everything all better-

[kikiam]

I cringed when I read the word 'blood'. I love how it's written, but poor Minnie. ;__;

[shinyasangel]

thank you ♥

yes.. ;~;

[dreamstatediii]

I finally can read this. And all I can say is this is sad.

Poor changmin

I just hope they don't really end up like that.

Hope to read more.

[shinyasangel]

yeah.. me. too.

I will <3