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Jun 26, 2008 22:27

She moves to snatch the photo from his hand, tearing the end of it even as he pulls away, dripping wet on the thick carpet. "He deserved to--he deserved to have someone there who loved him," he whispers, the remnant of the picture clutched in his fist.

Her face is white with fury. "Get out. Get out before I call the police."

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sarah_the_crab June 27 2008, 02:52:04 UTC
*squees*

I'm not a big MinSu fan but I love this and I really love Momentum so I'm looking forward to more!

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butterflyweb June 27 2008, 02:56:42 UTC
Hey, thanks for taking a chance even if it's not your usual taste. :) Glad you liked!

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luvmeanddespair June 27 2008, 02:54:32 UTC
I must be out of my mind. *headdesk*
Lies and slander. ♥

I so get it now that you've mentioned the connection to Momentum. You make me want to squish them.

he deserved to have someone there who loved him,
T_T Breaking my heart.

I love the way they interact Su's paranoia from living on the streets, Min's fragility and being eager to please. They're both a little screwed up. Both using each other. They just need to figure out how to make it more than what it is.

I expect more in a timely fashion. XD ♥

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butterflyweb June 27 2008, 02:58:09 UTC
*squishes you*

Why is you so nice to me. :) And don't give me lies and slander, Miss I-Have-Awesome-Fic-Locked-Away-On-My-Journal. I expect to see things from you in a timely fashion as well.

Glad you like!

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tokyoemergency June 27 2008, 03:08:12 UTC
Bah, bah, bah, I love some Minsu.

And I always look forward to reading your work. ♥

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yuxo June 27 2008, 03:11:04 UTC
OH GOD. CHAPTER FIC FROM YOU!? ARE YOU SERIOUS.

...ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! *_______________________* I will die.

Also, Momentum like...broke me in four. You guys basically picked me up and cracked my spine on your knees and then reached in tore my heart out. So uh, continuation of that would make me super uber happy, yes. Lol masochist much? D: >_>;;

Omg, the shower scene was so intense I just felt so SAD for both of them. ;_; But even more so, when Min was standing on the bridge cuz Yunho was gone. OR WAIT. The confrontation with Yunho's wife. ;_; GOD. Just. aslkfslkjasfsajlfkjdfewaoijsf

*huggles you*

...*huggles Su*

Actually, *huggles Min*

>_> No. *huggles dead!Yunho*

Sigh. ;_; I love you, Sarah. Oh so very much. ;_; I can't wait for more! ;_; ♥

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kakkobean June 27 2008, 03:13:33 UTC
*sniffs* I smell the beginning of a healing heart...♥

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