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[rawthorne]

Title: Etchings (3/6)
Authors: butterflyweb and nemesis_cry
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): HoMin, YooSu, JaeHo, YooMin, JaeSu, MinSu, OT5
Verse: Acts
Summary: Six scenes. Five men. A lifetime.
Chapter 1 | 2 |

Comments

[out_of_words24]

I have been lurking for the longest time, and I just want to say I adore the 'verse, I think it's fantastic, and while I mourn the fact that you're not including Jaemin in this series of scenes, in no way does that detract from the awesome that is this. Thank you <3

[rawthorne]

Yay for delurking! No Jaemin this time around, sadly, but maybe in the future.

Thank you for the feedback.

[kurogoma]

this chapter is emotionally intense, different tone from the first two with homin and yoosu. i did note after the other acts that yunjae had unresolved issues (esp when yoosu were taken) and i am glad this chapter's trying to resolve that.

i too wish there is a chapter on the emperor and his mentor, but it doesn't take away at all my anticipation of the rest of the chapters up to the OT5.

great work. ^^

[rawthorne]

Very good point, it was unresolved, they had a lot of tension between them. The problem is, they're men and communication about their feelings might not be easiest. And they're men in love with three others, so they'll probably shut up and try to protect the rest.

Silly boys.

Thank you for reading!

[cruel_disorder]

T_T Oh man. The emotion in this is..brilliant (I seem to be rehashing this word in every comment of mine to you two X'D)

I also felt that these two in particular seemed to have some unresolved issues going on so I'm glad Yunho has pretty much laid it bare bit by bit for Jaejoong ^^ ♥!

[rawthorne]

We don't mind :DD

Yunho is not the most skilled at talking about feelings, what with being raised to kill and follow orders and not much else.

Thank you for your review.

[shinchul303]

Delving deep this time.

[shinchul303]

And now I've read the whole thing.

Ah the mystery of Youngwoong. Those eyes. That face. All the hidden smiles. A player even though he's got it ALL and there's no need.

You've captured this. A fanfic first, I would think.

Those poor boys. They're probably just ordinary, and all this imposing fantasy spun around them on the net. I hope they don't read this stuff.

[rawthorne]

They probably are. And we have overactive imaginations.

Thank you for the read and thank you for the review. Jae!insecurities are always interesting to read.

[realitywaiting]

Beautiful, just beautiful! I love the emotion behind this one and alway wondered why there was something different there with these two! Lovely!

[rawthorne]

Thank you, so much. They have issues and they need to work through them. Bit by bit and they'll be fine :D