Never let go (oneshot)

[hosu_luvr_1592]

"SuSu-ah! Can we play twister please?" YunHo said while jumping up and down.
    "If you want to lose again."

" I wont. Not this time I have been practicing."

"Ok if you say so. Spin the wheel YooChun"

Calling out which hand or foot to which color YooChun just sat there watching them with jealousy. He knew he had a chance with them

Comments

[foolishlovexo]

aw!~

T_T Poor Junsu.
It was an interesting twist on the story, the beginning being a flashback, and all.

I really liked it!~
a nice read!

^^

(This is also me saying something about your other post here) Don't stop writing and posting please please please ^^ and if you even need help with anything, I'm always willing to help (so you can message me here or I can give you my e-mail) I like to help people the bet I can.

But really, don't stop, you can only get better from here, right? ^^

[hosu_luvr_1592]

thanks sure give me your email so if i need some help i will go to you.

[foolishlovexo]

rietechfish@hotmail.com (or I have aim: foolishboo)

[hosu_luvr_1592]

thanks i will add both

[junsu_hyung]

Keep it up! I love it!

Poor SuSu! *cuddles him and cries* TT___TT

[ttaejoong_hyuk]

haha, i really liked the jaemin...cute! aha, kewl story, really surprised me there. he died! how could u!!!! XD

[hosu_luvr_1592]

I know he's dead. Sad! *pouts* well i am writing a differnt story now and i can't believe it YunHo is dead in that one too!! Ahhhh!!

[naimu]

how sad~~~~~~~~~

it was kinda confusing to read~ kind sounded rushed- take your time ^_______^ your words should be the painted slowly- and there you get a masterpeice

hahah was that too cheesy?
you should post on HoSu YongWonHi~^___________^ you are very welcomed there~^__^ i promise~!!

[naimu]

ah .
ps.... thanks for sharing with us~^____________^ please continue to write~! dont give up!!!

[chloe1910]

OMG! dun tell me Junsu is commiting suicide???????no!!!

[hosu_luvr_1592]

I don't know it was a one deal thing unless you want me to write another.

[chloe1910]

well, you are the writer, so the power lies in your hand...but it'll be great if you write the sequel with Junsu not dying, or maybe he's moved on after a while?

[hosu_luvr_1592]

actually you know what you have convinced me enough that I will right a squeuel. I will let people see what Junsu does with his life without his Yunnie!!