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Jan 18, 2008 13:43

Title: Acts of Insurrection (Epilogue)
Authors: butterflyweb and nemesis_cry
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: OT5
Warning(s): violence, graphic sex, language
Summary: It's been six months since Changmin crashed on the remote planet known as Elysia. Five months since Yunho and Junsu found him. Four months since Jaejoong was shot by a man he and Yoochun both trusted. Now training ( Read more... )

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kakkobean January 18 2008, 13:06:12 UTC
;__; Beautiful ending; a bittersweet outcome that recognizes the terror that awaits in war, but allows a moment of peace before it all happens. ♥

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butterflyweb January 19 2008, 00:03:43 UTC
Thank you so much. :) I'm happy you enjoyed the final chapter and thanks again for reading!

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chloe1910 January 18 2008, 13:15:12 UTC
This ending is cimply lovely...
The tenderness in the Yunchun lovemaking almost rendered me to
tears...

Frankly speaking, I am not one who go for coupling that consist more than 2 person, but this fic somehow convinces me otherwise. What these 5 share here are not just sex or orgy but trust, believes, brotherhood, bonding and most of all, love. The selfless sharing among the 5 is so beautiful, it has left me speechless....

A truly beautiful and peaceful moment for the boys...the calm before the storm -the WAR...

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butterflyweb January 19 2008, 00:05:17 UTC
I'm happy that, even though ot5 isn't perhaps your main poison, you enjoyed this fic in general and this fic in particular. Thank you so much for the compliments!

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theresa_lynne January 18 2008, 13:23:03 UTC
Lovely epilogue, though I'm still confused about Jiexi. ^^ Is it meant to be that way?

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rawthorne January 18 2008, 13:32:12 UTC
No.

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butterflyweb January 18 2008, 15:27:26 UTC
*is slightly bewildered* Sorry if we confused you guys somewhere along the way or neglected to address it earlier but---Jiexi did not orchestrate Junsu's kidnapping. Not remotely so. She simply took the opportunity to further her own agenda.

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theresa_lynne January 18 2008, 16:32:19 UTC
Sorry about being confused. XDD Ah, okay. I never really understood Jiexi. I wasn't sure if she was a good person or just in it for herself or if she was evil. You know. But thanks for clearing that up. :D

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shinchul303 January 18 2008, 13:40:20 UTC
asdflkjgh

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butterflyweb January 19 2008, 00:09:46 UTC
hehe. Hope that's a good key smash! :)

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shinchul303 January 19 2008, 01:04:55 UTC
Yes. Good. I started several comments and just gave up on each of them. How can one critique something this good?

As I slogged through my day at work I DID keep coming back to a familiar phrase: Yuhno's ACTS1 line as he unties Yoochun's wrists and growls "When I fuck you, it won't be just to prove a point".

Your beautiful epilogue brings that line exquisitely full circle.

I think I'll spend the weekend reading fluff. It should help me decompress.

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butterflyweb January 19 2008, 00:10:07 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed.

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