Acts of Insurrection (Sequel to Acts of Contrition) (1/20)

[butterflyweb]

Simulators are nothing compared to the rush of endorphins when the body knows its being flung into the black, only thin metal sheets shield it from the void. It gets even better when you're not just flying solo, joy riding around moons and rocks without purpose.

Yunho knows the feeling well, it should be routine by now, but it isn't. As he

Comments

[aznmen]

OMFG!! SPOTT!!!

[aznmen]

... >////< <-- after reading OT5
.... o.O <--- after reading the last line
He's going to lose them soon.
AISHH!! Now I'm worried about what will happen in the next chapter... >.<

As always, your guys's writing is quite amazing xD and... nd... the way you wrote the OT5 was definitely different, but quite interesting~ it seemed as if they were apart, yet whole... quite an interesting effect xDD

[rawthorne]

They're all different facets of one entity, which is why they connect so well. Thank you for reading and reviewing and we hope you'll stay tuned!

[cruel_disorder]

Uh oh. I can just sense the onslaught of angst in the second part T_T

Not that I've read this chapter yet - I'm going to save it for AFTER my exam tomorrow so I can savour it. And since your fic tends to leave strange afterthoughts in my brain and hence usually distracts the hell out of me, I can't really afford that XD; *must..concentrate on....Renaissance history..*!

But I'm snagging this spot so I can post an appropriate review when I have time~ Much love for you two for posting so soon after Contrition was finished :)

[dongbangsarang]

omg

he's going to lose them soon

who who?!?!

T.T T.T T.T

<3

[rawthorne]

Thanks so much for the feedback! We're happy to have readers, even if they don't review, so no worries.

Stay tuned to see if Yunho is right or if he's just being fatalistic. Thanks again!

[skyefyres]

Just from the previews you provided and the last line and the fact that this chapter was so...happy and anti!angst makes me ache and shudder at the angst that I'm sure is coming ;_; GUH oh so good I dunno what to say

I've been waiting for this since acts of contrition ended and I so excited to see that you guys have started posting! This series is so just so much drama, angst and plain love. The way the ot5 developed really shows here and I'll bask in the happiness of it before it turns for a worse. GAH I hope I'm more coherent later, but good luck with writing and post update soon ne ^_^ (but please don't rush, even if waiting does kill me XD

sorry for the rant! X3 oh the last line ;_;!!!

[rawthorne]

You can't have the good without the bad and you can't have the bad without the good. There'll be many hurdles up ahead for our boys, but we're not so heartless as to leave them without reward.

Thank you so much for the amazing feedback!