Acts of Contrition (18/20)

[rawthorne]

The corridor is bathed in light and heat. Jaejoong tastes bile in his mouth, but he's got more pressing things to worry about. Like the fact that he can't breathe.

It feels like a boot is pressing down on his chest, cutting off his air supply. His diaphragm protests the way it's been constricted, his eyes mouth too, drawing horrible, shaky gasps

Comments

[sharkbait_ha]

ohmygod.

Must go do work so I can't decently comment (this seems to be the case everytime I comment), but wow. Jiexi is the heir! I kind of guessed that, but at the same time I wasn't sure. lol. And wow, the action was amazingly written. Just like being in a movie theater.

:)

[sarah_the_crab]

O_o

[luvmeanddespair]

Jiexi!?!

But huzzah for the boys getting Jaejoong the hell out of there!

Can't wait for the next bit. :D

[theresa_lynne]

Oh my god. Is Jaejoong dead? I can just feel the pain coming off in waves from this piece of fiction. It's crazy. I mean, you really don't know how this is going to end. They could all end up dead, or none at all. And I don't know where anyone stands with one another. All I know is they are trying to stay alive and that's it. Wow.

[capslocklove]

oh my god. That's pretty much all I can say. I forgot to breathe while reading this chapter, haha