Acts of Contrition (15/20)

[butterflyweb]

The door creaks open with a harsh metallic clang.  He spares it a withering glance before shutting it behind him, turning his full attention to the man cuffed to a chair in the center of the room. Or not cuffed. Changmin.

Extra precaution, then.

The scene is almost familiar, except Jaejoong knows this man will not be so easily swayed by pain or

Comments

[cruel_disorder]

Oh my god. Um. I have to come back later and reread this. Too much to take in all at once. >_O

But believe me that you have my utmost gratitude for updating so quickly. :D!

[luvmeanddespair]

Sly thing aren't you, Joongie? ;) That last bit was such love.

But aww, the Adventures of Young!HoMinSu killed me.

You can fantasize about guys in flightsuits later

*dies* Poor Min can't get a break.

[xiahtic]

aslkdajskldjeiu god. just. god. this is fascinating me SO much, because you always seem to start to give us clues but the clues leave us hanging, bracing for more, more, more and just. aslkdjd I am SO in love with this fic, and damn it all if it ends in just five more chapters DD: I swear I'll die when it ends. slkdjieur god.

I can't even describe what I feel when I read this, so apologies for the incoherent replies you've received from me thus far ;D

[blessedangel13]

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every chapter just seems to be a keyboard smash. XDD

THIS WAS SO AWESOME. :D

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[audient]

I love how you let us see a glimpse of JaeChun's history D:

And the way you wrote it from Jae's POV D:

And YunHo's way of thinking DD:

And the writing style DDD:

This is one of the best fics I've read in a long time, honest.