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FIC: The Smell of a Family 1/1

May 11, 2011 14:26

Title: The Smell of a Family
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Kurt, Finn, Burt
Spoilers: Season two
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1631
Summary: Burt and Kurt invite Finn for some bonding time at the garage. Too bad the smell of gas and the garage make Finn sick. Written for the Glee Fluff Meme but it's not that fluffy.

( Finn didn't know if he should feel excited or nervous... )

user: gleek_inc, character: kurt hummel, character: finn hudson, rating: g, genre: fluff, character: burt hummel

Comments 2

marchling June 26 2011, 22:36:44 UTC

Aww, poor Finn. I loved that he wanted to go, even though he was pretty sure he would be miserable. Caring!Kurt is a big plus too. I also appreciated that you didn't make Finn a huge idiot, as sometimes happens in stories like this. All in all, this was pretty perfect.

I'd love a follow up where Carole tells Burt and Kurt the truth!

Great job!

gleek_inc June 26 2011, 22:51:27 UTC

Thanks:) I have a sequel on my list, it'll probably just be a while before I get to it unless I get inspired. I've never seen Finn as an idiot, just naive and a little simple-minded.