Fic: Go Down To The Ocean for nekare

Jul 07, 2006 09:05

Title: Go Down To The Ocean
Author: such_heights
Giftee: nekare
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2300
Characters/Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Warnings: A bit of James/Lily het just at the beginning.
Summary: Sitting on the sand with a breeze dancing around the nape of his neck, Remus watched Sirius and felt his insides ( Read more... )

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such_heights August 12 2006, 09:57:38 UTC
Thanks ever so much, I'm delighted you enjoyed it!

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yaycoffee July 8 2006, 16:06:01 UTC
This was just beautifully sweet. I loved the pace of things once they got to the island --all the tentativeness and the "not yet"s on both Sirius's and Remus's parts. I just sort of fell into this one, you know... that wonderful thing when you're reading words and then all of a sudden you're smelling ocean air? Fantastic, m'dear!

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such_heights August 12 2006, 09:58:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad the pace worked for you - I spent a fair bit of time trying to work that out properly. And smelling ocean air, you say? Brilliant, I'm delighted that worked!

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such_heights August 12 2006, 09:59:33 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, especially the Lily dialogue - I had so much fun with that! =D

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nekare July 8 2006, 22:04:51 UTC
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!

This is sooo much better than what I was expecting, and I just can't seem to stop smiling right now. :) Loved the James/Lily, and your Lily, in general (she's kinda crazy and so damn interesting), and wee this sentence:

Coldly, cruelly, callously, Lily shook her head and sealed his fate.

Was the awesomeness. Then the beach part, and everything feels so fitting with the boys, although yayz! for the awkwardness. They're so playful and lovable and really IC.

Thanks again, this was just great. ♥ ♥ ♥

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such_heights August 12 2006, 10:02:04 UTC
Ah, you have no idea how relieved I was when I got this comment originally - I got your name and just went 'noooooo, the pressure!' So phew, but also thank you very much, and I'm so, so pleased that you liked it. Lily was the most fun, and I did do my best to cram in the awkward, so I'm glad that worked for you.

=D

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shaggydogstail July 9 2006, 00:58:06 UTC
Eee, that gave me so many happy wriggles! Absolutely lovely. ♥

Also, Lily was most amusing and wonderfully bossy.

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such_heights August 12 2006, 10:02:51 UTC
Yay for happy wriggles! I'm delighted you enjoyed it.

Lily is the best. We all know this.

Thanks very much =D

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