For Crucio_4_Coffee: Trapped With An Intruder [Fic, PG-13, Harry/Draco]

[fiona_fawkes]

Title: Trapped With An Intruder
Author: ---
Giftee: crucio_4_coffee
Characters/Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,000
Summary: Harry is in hiding during the war when Draco comes to him for help.

Comments

[faynia]

Hahahaha fish and chips....anyway.

Draco is in need of all sorts of snuggles here. I hope you intend to write a sequel some day mystery author.

[phantomdove]

I love how gritty and real this is. I too hope a sequel is in the works.

[crucio_4_coffee]

I really like it -- as in *squeeeeee*. I love how real everything feels -- the descriptions of the sensations really caught me right up. (And now I want fish and chips...)

I love how open you left the story. But, I'm just warning you now, after the reveal is over, I'll be aggrevating the shit out of you to write a sequel. ;) Thank you so much -- I really love it!

[maraudersaffair]

I'm so glad you liked it!

I'm actually thinking about writing a sequel. Maybe you can help me -- where do you see the characters going from here?

[crucio_4_coffee]

I'd just like to see where you take them from here. But I'd definitely love to see how Draco (and Harry) handle this! Thank you again for writing this for me!

I second that emotion

[crucio_4_coffee]

Intense little build up...you do intend to keep this going, don't you? There are so authors many who don't have any sense of pacing their stories; many stories read like Cliff Notes. And I don't see many spelling or grammar mistakes (drool) in your (precious). ficlet Excuse my excitement, but there aren't many dedicated writers in fanfiction.

There might be 'good' writers playing with it for all I know, but they do not respect it enough to work as hard as they would for one of their 'real' fics.
I have been reading in this fandom for too long, I have no pride; please keep going with this idea. If I had ANYTHING, I would offer bribes, How about an emotional godiva chocolate :-)

[anonymous]

this fic is fabulous. i love the detail you put into the sensations and physical descriptions. it makes me feel as though i'm there or that i could easly imagine feeling it myself. you're very, very talented and would do well writing your own novels. keep up the good work. ;D

[incunabulist]

Whoa. This is great. It's got a lot more weight than a lot of things of this length-- you've thought it out really well. I'll join the chorus of sequel-wanters. :)