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Feb 22, 2004 10:37

Title: Who to Blame
Author: Aces Low
Rating: PG
Challenge: Hermione sets Ron and Harry up
Summary: Harry, Ron, some cursed mistletoe. Ron reminisces.
Warnings (if applicable): First slash fic, but at least I took a stab at it. Blame that horoscope for telling me to try something new.
Notes: Special thanks to highlydoubtful for betaing. Any mistakes left are entirely ( Read more... )

pg, aces_low, 2004

Comments 27

abigail89 February 22 2004, 11:39:52 UTC

Fabulous job. Good use of canon details and then growing them beyond. You've captured the essence of their (the trio's) relationship very well.

Thumbs up!

Re: aces_low February 22 2004, 19:21:28 UTC

Thanks! I hadn't intended for this to be such a trio fic, but it just seemed to come out that way. I'm glad you liked it.

fordanglia February 22 2004, 12:44:40 UTC

Absolutely wonderful! I love the style and the relationship between the trio. Very well played out.

Re: aces_low February 22 2004, 19:22:12 UTC

Thanks bunches! It's so nice to hear you enjoyed it.

schnoogles February 22 2004, 12:49:40 UTC

One final second of hesitation and here, amongst the catcalls and wolf whistles, I demonstrate just what true best mates are for.

EEEEEEEEEE! *claps*

Wonderful!

Re: aces_low February 22 2004, 19:24:33 UTC

*bows modestly* Hee! Thank you so much!

I love your icon by the way, M/P is most definitely my OTP.

Re: schnoogles February 23 2004, 15:52:03 UTC

*nods*

thetreacletart February 22 2004, 13:06:57 UTC

He leaned back against the headboard and stretched, “Now then, want to tell me what happened, or should I just assume that Hermione was right and you didn’t like it?”

Brilliant line!

Lovely story. I like the dynamic between the three.

Nicely done.

Re: aces_low February 22 2004, 19:28:30 UTC

*blushes* Why thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I tried hard to make the three of them play off each other like I imagine they do.

luminousmarble February 22 2004, 14:49:44 UTC

This is such a fun fic. I really adore the way you've kept their friendship at the fore, and let it build slowly on their experiences. That's a kiss I'd like to see!

Re: aces_low February 22 2004, 19:31:16 UTC

Thanks! I've always imagined H/R as being something that evolved over the years, not a sudden realization, so I tried to create that. I'm glad you liked it. And that kiss... *grins* let's just say they enjoyed it very much.